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Moonlit Dangers by TishaKay7
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Sometimes your plans don't work out because Fate has better ones. Crystelle Jackson has it all figured out to each detail on how her life should be and should end up. But when a sexy stranger and not so sexy werewolves decide to barge into her life, she had no choice but to throw her plans out the window. Crystelle's whole world starts crashing down when she is kidnapped into a world she hardly recognizes anymore. With a hot romance at her fingertips, powers she never knew existed and enemies out for blood, little did she know what she was getting herself into. What lies ahead on Crystelle's twisted journey?
Untitled by CrazyStraz13
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"People think I'm crazy to dream of a world any different to our own, but I can't help it. Without dreams, where is the beauty in life?" Verity lives in a world where there's a place for everyone and everyone is in their place. Except for her. Born with mismatching eyes and a love of history and science, Verity does not belong with all the other Blondes, despite her best efforts. After a party gone bad reveals who she truly is, Verity finds herself in a position she could have never imagined. She is forced to question herself and everything she was raised to believe in order to make a choice: Remain in her safe little world, on the outside looking in, or join the search for a world she had believed to be destroyed by war to find a place where she belongs.
The Mystery of my life by Drazy0_0
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Warning: Cliche af! Wrote when I was bit too young! _______________ #8 Romanticsuspence . (13/3/19) "Fuck! You are so gay!" I blurted out angrily. He made me so angry I would do anything to get on his last nerve. He roughly grabbed my shoulder and pushed me to him. His face red with anger. He was just inches away from me. His breath was fanning me then he whispered softly but with a hint of warning "COME AGAIN." He made me so mad. I wanted to hit him. But I did know If he got any more pissed he might as well kill me. "You got nothing on you Agrawal." I stressed the syllables of his name. His jaw tightened and till now his hold on me was so tight almost cutting my blood flow. I practically could see him taking deep breaths. His eyes turned a shade darker. "Let's find out whether I am a gay or not." With those words he pushed us inside my room. ___________________ Young Kiara thought her new job would be a life changing experience, but when she meets her new boss she realizes her life will be changing more than she excepted. Kiara can't stop life from embarrassing her in front of her new boss and he can't stop himself from being rude to her. Can she handle his rudeness to figure out the true mystery of her boss or will he break her? ___ All RIGHTS RESERVED Copyright © 2015 by Drazy0_0
Cupid's Consequence by colorfulcurtains
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In a desperate attempt to please Aphrodite, Tris Amoretto — the modern-day Cupid — must undertake his biggest challenge yet; finding true love for Muna, a helpless teen who is tired of playing third wheel to her best friend's relationships. Much to his surprise, the task seems easier than he had first thought. That is until a nightmare turns into a shocking reality. Tris must fight his way through Muna's selfish desires, unexpected enemies and most of all, the unfortunate consequences of his own actions. Because even the Goddess of Love and Beauty can get ugly when she wants to.
RICHKIDS by BeautifullyComplex
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They're better than you, but they struggle too. In the posh city of Beverly Hills lies some of the richest teens in the state and where money lurks so does trouble. Damon Felix, the school's Lacrosse star - and certified hottie - is learning the hard way that money can't buy you out of everything even when you're the heir to millions. Jacqueline Lexington's life is falling apart at the seams but it only takes a tear through the middle to break a dollar bill - and a family. Erika Felix, queen of Alabaster Preparatory School's social scene, thinks she's swimming in diamonds but soon she finds herself wondering if they're even real. Although money isn't a problem, you've got ninety-nine more when you're a rich kid. (Wattpad Featured) COVER MADE BY aurion-
Every Missing Piece by gracekay
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One day of memories is all you have. One false step can endanger the entire city. One mistake can be enough to kill you. And Carra's made many mistakes. The city of Gotten has finally found a cure for the virus that wiped out the world. The cure, though, comes at a price: one more day of life in exchange for years of memories. No one has ever refused the cure. Not until Carra. The virus should have killed Carra, but instead, she's left alone in a world where only she can remember yesterday. She also remembers the Assembly's penalty for not taking the cure-- death. Life on the line, Carra must pretend she never regained her memory, but it's impossible to ignore the danger that surrounds her: a violent secret society, a string of disappearances, and the Assembly's desperate interest in Carra. The events are connected. . .but it will take a powerful supply of memories to learn how.
You Again by MidnightStorm14
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Olivia Kohl is living the dream life. Sure, it might be a bit boring, but a perfect boyfriend, an ideal career as a newspaper columnist, and a place to call hers is enough for Olivia. After an accident, Joey realizes he that he will never be able to play the sport he loves again. Joey decides instead of playing sports, he will write about them for a newspaper. Much to his pleasure, he realizes he will be working with one Olivia Kohl, an old classmate. Joey Richards, according to Olivia, has always been trouble. Seeing him again has brought back old memories she doesn't wish to be reminded of, including the fact that she use to have a crush on him. What doesn't help matters is the fact that he is still as handsome, charming, and humorous as he once was. To make matters worse, Olivia starts to realize what she needs isn't what she wants.
Dreams Are Forever [#Wattys2016] by teenagebookworm_
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"They say if you dream a thing more than once, it's sure to come true," I tell my daughter Shelby, quoting her favourite Disney character and trying to believe it myself. Ever since I introduced Shelby to her first Disney film, she's dreamed of working at Disney World. What could seem better to an eleven year old than being a beautiful princess at the happiest place on Earth? My Shelby might not be like the other children in her class. But who says different is wrong? She's simply a little girl with big dreams. "Do not be fooled by its commonplace appearance. Like so many things, it is not what is outside, but what is inside that counts." - Aladdin
Savage Mate by redbirdwriter
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{UNDERGOING MAJOR EDITTING} Two packs that had long opposed each other. Both packs blamed one another for past transgressions. But when the Red Devil pack alpha's daughter, Sydney, finds out she mates with the one person she was taught to hate, Pale Moon's future alpha Xavier, will she choose her mate or her pack. While she makes this decision, another plans to take the alpha title away from her. Schemes and scandals, Sydney has to navigate through a treacherous battle field to accomplish her goals and save those she holds dear. In this fast paced adventure, can Sydney be the Alpha she's been taught to be or will her love for Xavier change everything. Warning: Some Scenes include some Sexual Content
Crimson Nightmares (#WATTYS2016) by FuzzyZombieUnicorn
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Juliet's whole life has been turned upside down, and it's about to get worse. Moving halfway across the world, she finds herself thrown into the middle of a nightmare that has come alive. Someone or something is attacking the residents of small town Nylstroom, and Juliet wants answers. But she's not asking the right questions... Highest ranking in Vampire #181 (28 June 2016) :D Cover Art Credit @I_Anna UPDATES: *FRIDAYS* Follow me on twitter @ZE_Nelda_author or like my Facebook page @Z.E. Nelda for news and updates! Follow me on Wattpad to be the first to know about new stories and updates. You can also find me on tumblr @fuzzyzombieunicorn. Starting date - 14/06/2016 Finished -