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Just a little thing I'm doing to hone my writing skills. This is strictly casual, I just need to practice writing good dialogue and imagery and so on. Comments would be nice just to tell me what I'm doing right or wrong.

Leave your questions about 'Enigmatic' and 'Sacrifice' in the comments, and I'll try to answer them all! Whether they are for me as the author, or for a character, I'll answer as many as I can!!

From the best-sellong book Divergent but i created a story of my own not about four but about the hot villian Eric......Why did i had to fall in love with him in the first place why did i chosed Dauntless im not that brave.....Would he even like me?????.............Sometimes he stares at me,but what if he does it with every one but i admit i love when he does it.Ok youll have to find out what happens to Merrys/Megan Love story..Well Eric feel the same is he just playing.with Megans feelings? Story will contain Rated R.Will contain sex scene

'I want to say I love you but keep it to goodnight Because love will mean falling and she's afraid of heights... Literally' This is a fan-fiction about one shy yet potential girl spencer shai who was born into erudite. Her Parents were horrid always telling her she wasn't good enough. Once her mother died her father became worse turning to physical abuse instead of just verbal. Luckily for her it was almost time for her to choose her faction. All she had to do was avoid getting erudite on her test, that can't be that hard can it?

The next Choosing Ceremony is rapidly approaching, and the entirety of Chicago are preparing for the upcoming event. For the existing members of Dauntless, things are already changing daily and Jac finds herself in the middle of some big changes. She has to sacrifice the things that she already knows and does for the sake of the people she loves, as well as stumbling upon the biggest dilemma she's had to face yet. Torn between what she knows is right, the people that want her to do wrong, the people she loves and the people that she wants to save, Jac has to make the biggest decision of her life, even if it causes more pain.

(ERICxOC) Sixteen-year-old Luella Rolfe is born from the Dauntless faction and is the daughter of the Dauntless leaders, Melissa and Adrien Rolfe. Luella is always one for dangerous challenges, a typical Dauntless. Everything seems to be normal until she is suddenly arranged to marry a certain Dauntless leader, whom she barely even knows. This is a story of love, friendship, trust, and betrayal. ***The war never happened, but it might happen later.***

Tris finds herself caught. When Eric confesses his like for her, and Four constantly giving her hints. What will happen? Will Eric win her over or will Four once again beat Eric, this time for love not life? I do not own Divergent. Check out Victoria Roth to read her Divergent series.

Hello! This story is about Tris and Eric. Yes, my main OTP is fourtris but I thought I'd try something new (:. Enjoy!