Hello! This is my first story so I appreciate any form of tips or criticizm given to me! It will help me understand what my readers like to see more of and how to help them understand my stories better. It also helps me write better stories for you guys, girls, or any pronoun babes ! Thank you so much for taking your time to read my story, Have a lovely day!! A new student, named Apollo, joins a new school called Frost Ridge Academy. His parents are dead and he has his working stepdad and younger sister. He meets many new people and makes friends and even makes a potential lover. They go on many adventures, but one day the adventures go far into the void. What will Apollo's friends do to help him? or will they just leave him to rot. Read this story to find out!