Poems about love, life, and the love you don't have, but wish you could.

This is my first poem so please be honest and tell me if you like it.

Cassie and Logan once had a perfect relationship before Logan suddenly wanted to break it off. Six months later, Cassie's brother, Jack. goes missing and she only had Logan to turn to for help. As Cassie and Logan struggle with their relationship, time is running out for Jack.