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Inexplicable Love(editing) by alishaOpry
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There's a group of boys at our school called "The Rippers" , well that's what we call them, they just call themselves Luke, Alexander,Tommy and Tyler. Their ever so famous names. Who are they? You may ask , well their the "go to" guys when you just want them to simply "tear your hymen" as they would say . Without any questions or feelings. With a price of course Athena Hale reaches out to "The Rippers" because she's lied to her boyfriend of 2 months that she wasn't a virgin, after talking nonsense of how she wanted him...physically. Luke Istvan is a "Ripper" . But what if Luke no longer wants to be one? What if Luke wants what he's never gotten ... Love Will he get his proclaimed love? Well only one way to find out !
Words To Remember || ON HOLD || by little-red-dreamer
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Caspar and Giselle are both part of a musical theatre company, which has decided to put everyone into groups, giving each the task of writing scripts. As the two are paired together, they begin to form a close friendship, and when their script is chosen, all seems well. But on the night of the production, things take a turn for the worst. Follow Giselle as she struggles with thoughts of guilt and the feelings of loneliness, all while trying to remind Caspar of their time spent together.
Scourge by bpgriffin
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Maddox Chadwyke had given up on everything. Fourteen years ago, he led his people to victory against the Council of Humanity. In return for his heroism, the newly formed Confederation of Human Peoples bestowed the title “Scourge of Humanity” upon him and sent him into exile. Betrayed and still reeling from the atrocities of war Maddox disappeared without a trace until he was discovered by Ethan Whitaker. The teenager begs Maddox to teach him the art of Soule Manipulation, the method by which Ascendeds use internal energy to perform miraculous feats of body and mind. The only complication: Ethan is a Sape, someone who might not have a Soule at all. Ethan’s appearance forces Maddox to confront his past and he is initially reluctant to teach the boy, but Ethan’s tenacity eventually wins Maddox over and he agrees to take Ethan under his wing. The training that Ethan must undergo is fraught with peril and each success is met with an even greater challenge. Does Ethan have what it takes to become a Manipulator? How far is he willing to go? Will Ethan break before he unlocks the secrets of the Scourge?