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ASHWOOD ACADEMY by RaeWhite
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[EDITORS' CHOICE, June 2020][#1 History June 2020] -- Five black students make history as the first to integrate a prestigious school for gifted students in 1950's Vermont. One student, Anita Prescott, is a young girl whose strength and leadership keeps the isolated group together. She finds her wariness tested when she falls for a handsome and thoughtful white student. In a time when loving someone of another race wasn't just frowned upon, but dangerous, a pair of young lovers must find a way to press through, with the help of good friends. **For teens and up, for sexual situations, racist language, and racial violence.**
Over the Wall: A Collection of Short Stories (NaNoWriMo 2014) by emmernemmer
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This year for NaNoWriMo, I am writing a short story anthology. It will feature thirty or so short stories (my hope is to write one per day to fulfill my 1,667 per day word requirement) about varying things. Each morning, I will randomly select a number between one and thirty and I will look at the corresponding list of first lines I will have. I will take that line and write a short story using it and then the next day I will do the process over again (some stories might relate to each other, some might not). Anyway I will edit the story for that day and post it here. It may not be posted exactly on the corresponding day, but in the end there will be thirty short stories. P.S. Although these are somewhat edited they are still rough drafts so please treat them as such.
A Blackened Eternity by jaspumpkin
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With time dwindling, the world descending into turmoil, and chaos being unleashed on the population, three unlikely companions must join together to rectify the "accident" they've caused. Time travel has been labeled a myth and a lie, but after the catastrophe, the future has been called into question. With two kids trapped in the fiery bonds of eternity, and one left to deal with the world's shocking aftermath, it's uncertain whether or not society will go on. Can these three young adults save their existence, fix the crumbling planet, and discover the secret that has held the universe together for so long? Only time can tell. [Update schedule: approximately every other weekend] [Highest ranking: #43 Adventure (12/06/2014)]
Lost Shadows by ShiiVa_PaTiiBeRii
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Of Blood And Bracelets by Alfaaz_
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[Book 1 in the Armilla Trilogy] "Where there is light there will be darkness" The Armillas. Forged by the ancient guild of Alteron, were the five most powerful artifacts in existence. Created to remind humanity of its most endearing qualities: Wisdom, loyalty, bravery, hope and compassion. It's first wielders were chosen from the royal house of Arcatium; the kingdom to which Alteron had pledged allegiance. The princess and her friends were selected to share the burden. But the burden proved too great and before the new year began, greed, betrayal and loss had created irreparable rifts in a friendship that had once been unbreakable. Over the centuries the last of the original wielders has wandered, charged with the responsibility to pass the Armillas on, to right what was once done wrong, to fulfill a prophecy and to break a curse. Salvation came in the form of five young girls who must now shoulder a burden that proved too great for their predecessors. With an ancient enemy bent on seeking revenge, can the new set of wielders prove their worth? Can they survive with their friendship intact? Or will history repeat itself? x---------------------------x -The cover credit goes to @solidarity_i
My Best Mistake [#1][#WATTYS2016][COMPLETE] by EmmaNorman_
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Chloe Parker was a model student. That was until she made a mistake of sleeping with the player. And ended up pregnant with his child. {COMPLETE}{#WATTYS2016} HIGHEST RANKING: #25 Teen Fiction {22/01/2016}
Unnatural by gossamersilverglow
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The problem with the world is that no one ever shuts up. What people don’t know, is that it’s even louder when no one is actually talking. This world is deafening, filled with thoughts of people in pain, dealing with the constant cruelties of their everyday life, and I hear it all. I guess that's why, up until a week ago, I was locked up in a mental institution. (Summary is a work in progress... it doesn't have the plot in it at all). Updates? Will not happen often. I'm sorry I can't give a more concrete time period. I just don't write that way! Thanks for your patience. That beautiful, newly added cover was done by my go-to cover designer xXArachnidXx (http://www.wattpad.com/user/xXArachnidXx). Thank you for your wonderful work! Isn't it gorgeous?