Started writing this for a competition forget to send it in XD please give me feedback it would help a lot! :)

A Civil war rips through the galaxy as humanity struggles to position them selves among the stars. A shadowy foe lurks amongst the darkness of space. Heros rise and fall. Will we be able to unite when the inevitable strikes? Or will humanity continue to fight amongst themselves while a greater threat plans their destruction...

Eva is a normal girl. She has weird friends, a dysfunctional family, and when the pressure of life and relationships becomes too much for her; it sends her spiraling into a depression, and she takes the chance of a lifetime. She ASKS the burglar who broke into her house to KIDNAP HER! And by doing so starts a journey filled with new spine-tingling experiences, heart felt emotions and just a little bit of crazy to balance it all out, but even Eva isn't ready for how this day will change her life forever. One thing is for sure: Life will never be the same.