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Thetis Intergalatic by -1812-
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Second Officer Alexandra Church never dreamed she'd be picked to help lead humanity into the outer reaches of the solar system. Since Earth stumbled upon gateway technology -- a doorway which can transport a person several thousand miles in but a footstep -- space travel moved from the theoretical to common practice. Now, in 2097, Space Tycoon, Veronica Wolfe wants to make history by sending an expedition to the edge of the solar system upon her ship: Providence. However, as political conflict and warring societies collide on board, mankind's most ambitious space program may land in ruin. The amazing cover was made by Ferret-bird!
The Day the Party Began by Nesbitt_Clement
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We've all been there, we've all wished that we could be someone new or different. Taylor has this chance. She has moved to a new town to start high school and start fresh. This is the story behind Taylor's move. Her drive to transform her persona and become popular. And most importantly, her first party. #419 in Teen Fiction January 28, 2015
The Oddment Emporium by artistaherby
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A book based on actual events, a collection of fantastically odd short stories, a cornucopia of eclectic delights with accompanying images on every page.
The Meta Code (Updated Sporadically) by cyborgladiator
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Teenage super soldiers Z-25 (A.K.A Hunter) and A-23 (A.K.A Esparonza) created to be the ultimate warriors. They have been locked away after being ordered to kill their own team members. Now, their only hope of freedom is to complete a series of life, or death games. Should they fail... ...well, let's just say they can't. Also, some chapters are split up. This is more for my benefit as it takes me a while to write sometimes. Updates are sporadic as of right now. COMMENTS AND VOTES ARE GREATLY APPRECIATED.
Maid For Him by charli204
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Cate never in a million years thought that she would become a maid, none the less be caught dancing and cleaning by a Prince. But then again, life always takes an unexpected turn at the wildest of moments. For Cate, that is exactly what happened. When Cate gets a live-in job as a maid, at the home of the royal family of Nova Flava, she is thrown into a world beyond even the richest of the riches wildest dreams. A world where 'casual wear' was a "no-no" and jeans were a "throw-away", she finds herself in a world of glitz and glamour, where formal style and rich diamonds was your everyday thing. But that's not the only thing new in her novel-like world. The famous Prince Drew, himself, has caught the eye of the casual live-in maid and from then on comes another story to tell. Will anything more come of the 'eye-catching' moment between Prince Drew and Cate? Or will his four no-casual-servants-allowed brat of sisters get in the way of anything more than acquaintances? Cover by wonderlandwriter Description by whisperrrmyname100x
endommagé by beautifulhemmings_
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damageˈdamɪdʒ/ inflict physical harm on (something) so as to impair its value, usefulness, or normal function. Sadly when I met him he was damaged.