Hanzo Shimada decides to try using a sniper rifle and his eyes land on someone...interesting. It is McHanzo. WARNING IN ADVANCE SMUT ⚠(Just look for these signs)⚠ ------ The cool air rushed past me as I shot every training robot. I was satisfied with my work so I switched to the sniper rifle. Ana's scope was perfectly in place on top. I moved to a spot where I could see the range clearly but was hidden to everyone else. I looked through the scope to aim for a training robot, but instead I saw a person standing in the way, back turned. I moved away from the scope and got a clear look at the man. He wasn't anyone I recognized, who could he be. The new recruit? He had a revolver in his holster and wore a giant hat on his head. He sort of looked like a, what was the name... Cowman? Suddenly his face turned and he looked right at me. ------ COMPLETED STORY I do not own any Overwatch characters ©Blizzard Entertainment. I do happen to own the plot.

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