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Missy's Reviews by missanthr0pe
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Are you looking for some honest feedback on your book? Want to know what's working and what's not? I would love an opportunity to read and review your book on my Twitch Channel! All reviews are posted to YouTube afterward and links posted to Wattpad. My review style varies based on the book but I generally review the following: 1. Why did I choose your book to review? 2. What's the first impression? (Based on cover, title, summary, and tags) 3. Character/Plot Summary 4. What is working? 5. Opportunities for improvement 6. Favorite Quotes 7. Concluding Thoughts
Reason to Breathe by akshiwritess
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~𝑯𝒊𝒔 𝑳𝒊𝒍𝒚 & 𝑯𝒆𝒓 𝑹𝒐𝒐𝒉~🎀 ~Rohit Bhardwaj Aashika Singhania~ (Surgeon×CEO, Reverse Grumpy×Sunshine, Tarnished, Betrayal & Revenge, Death Game, Action-Romance) --- Dr. Rohit Bhardwaj, one of India's finest cardio-surgeons, and Aashika Singhania, the formidable CEO of X-Guides, are bound by an arranged marriage. Rohit, unknowingly engaged to the love of his life, is overjoyed. But for Aashika, burdened by past traumas, this marriage is just a duty-a compromise for her parents' happiness. As their journey unfolds, they become each other's safe haven. But just when love starts to heal old wounds, the storm hits. Betrayals strike, pasts resurface, and their world crumbles. The ultimate blow? The loss of someone irreplaceable-their unborn child, the purest part of their love stolen before it could give them the 'Reason to Breathe'. Betrayals strike like daggers, pasts unravel like haunting nightmares, and love is tested beyond limits. But as fate bends to the hands of destiny, they rise again-stronger, fiercer. Only to know the betrayal wasn't from an outsider. It was from "their own blood". With no hesitation, no second thoughts, they vow to seek justice. For the one who left them before even feeling their embrace, before a single touch they deserved. "Even if it meant standing against the ones who gave them life, their own family". By the time their war ends, they are broken, betrayed, but not defeated. They rise, rebuilding their world from the ashes, holding onto the only thing that remained untainted, untarnished-their love. And on that fateful day, as the world watched, true, bare, unyielding love conquers all. --- "This has to end, for me, for you, for what's ours!" --- #𝐑𝐨𝐡𝐈𝐤𝐚🍂 //MML is obsessed with MFL with a capital 'O'// Prepare to be enchanted by a journey that blends emotions and leaves you with butterflies with every word.💋
UNPLANNED LOVE! by Manu_gyani_Avon
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| NOT AN ARRANGED MARRIAGE STORY | MAITRI SHUKLA, 29, A Musician who has carved her name in such a way that music industry will always remember her for her contribution in it. Mastered several instruments. Won several awards and touched the heights of the sky.... Her past is what lives in her heart fresh and for every damn reason she is going to cherish it forever even when it pains her.....She stopped expecting from life solely devoted to music and the lost beat of her heart.... NEELAKSH DESHMUKH, 30 An IAS officer built of strength and discipline. He is always ready to serve his people, dutiful and respected officer whom people believes and they reflect. Betrayal is what broke him in the worst ways possible. Someone he loved wrecked every part of his soul in ways that took him years to recover but finally he did. Nightmares became regular and panic attacks came like sneezes. Despite of all he built himself all over again and stood infront of the world as very essence of strength. The toughest mind with the kindest and softest heart is what describes him the best........ When the two broken worlds collide, they become a mess. A mess which is heavy to bear and explosive to clear. Will they be able to pick each piece of their broken hearts and become one? questionable though but lets just dive into their story and live through the love they build and the love they lived......... |TROPES| #Fake Dating #Musician X IAS #REVERSE Grumpy X Shunshine # Twists peh twists # Love Forever # Jo apko theek lage maan lijiye ^_^
The villain's Rise by butterflyindia
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"The villain's Rise" This story begins with an orphaned child who lives in a cremation ground... he is adopted by a man, who has a three-day old daughter. (Chapters 1-3) As the story progresses, we enter the world of high school life, where we see the young girl fall in love with that orphaned child. We also meet new characters, including the orphaned child's half-brother, who attends the same school. High school life is a time when everyone experiences their first love, and this story is no exception. (Chapters 3-29) But does the orphaned child also fall in love with someone or his life purpose is something else? From Chapter 22 onwards, the story takes a hybrid approach, blending high school life with the introduction of the mafia king. Mafia king is a renowned person of the city and underworld, everyone feared by his name , he always wears black outfit with a mask, till yet no one sees his face. Initially, the mafia king appears to be soft, kind, and empathetic. However, his brutal, arrogant, and inhumane nature is slowly revealed, he is doing everything for his mother. But then the young girl's path crosses with the mafia king, but the story takes a twist when it is revealed that the mafia king is actually someone who's very close to that young girl. This story doesn't have a traditional hero; instead, the villain can be seen as the hero. Thankyou 🙏 ♦️Contain - mature themes Strong language Violence
𝐏𝐢𝐲𝐚 : 𝐇𝐢𝐬 𝐨𝐛𝐬𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐢𝐨𝐧 by readwithpreeti
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●𝐏𝐢𝐲𝐚 : 𝐇𝐢𝐬 𝐨𝐛𝐬𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐢𝐨𝐧● "𝐆𝐥𝐢𝐦𝐩𝐬𝐞" ๑ ꕤ⌕𝗦𝗵𝗮𝘂𝗿𝘆𝗮 𝘅 𝗽𝗶𝘆𝗮๑ ꕤ⌕ Piya said, lowering her eyes, "I want to ask you something." Shaurya looked at her, and she continued, "First, don't be afraid, I'm not going to eat you, okay?" Finally, Piya looked into his eyes and asked, "Why do you want to marry me?" Shaurya replied in a cold tone, "Do you have any objections to this marriage?" Piya was intimidated by his tone. Gathering courage, her voice trembled, "Don't you think our age gape is too big? You're 28, and I'm 21..." Shaurya's fingers clamped down on Piya's jaw, his grip brutal as he wrenched her face upwards, forcing her to meet his blazing gaze, "This marriage will happen, even if I have to force you, got that, Piyaa Thakur?" Piya was terrified, feeling trapped and helpless. Tears streamed down her face as she cursed her fate, wondering why these things always happened to her. "In the dark underbelly of wealth and power, a twisted game of obsession unfolds.." Meet Shaurya Rajvanshi, the ruthless CEO of the Rajvanshi Empire, driven by a hunger for control and a thirst for revenge. And Piya Thakur, the innocent youngest daughter of a toxic family, trapped in a world of manipulation and deceit. As their paths collide, the lines between love and obsession blur. Shaurya's all-consuming passion threatens to destroy Piya's fragile world. Is this twisted desire love, or a cruel revenge? Will Shaurya's fiery passion ignite Piya's soul, or reduce her to ashes? Dive into a world of dark secrets, toxic relationships, and the blurred lines between love and obsession."
Bitter Brownies ( Book 1 Of BITTER Series) by author_lizz09
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"You seem to be really intelligent," she said, running her fingers over the spine of my book. "More than you, I guess," I replied, trying to sound nonchalant. "Then you must know the meaning of every word," she said. "Not every word, but most of them," I replied. "Do you know what manhoos (cursed) means?" she asked. "Cursed," I repeated. "Where have you heard it?" I asked, curious-or maybe more concerned. "My Dadi Ammi says I'm manhoos," she continued. Her eyes lost the sparkle they had a moment ago. I was left speechless for a moment, wondering why a grandmother would say such a harsh word. "It seems like you don't know either," she said, her voice laced with disappointment. I stared at her face, and before I knew it, I blurted out, "Beautiful." "Cursed means beautiful," I added hastily. 🌟🌟 Alizey Haider: A girl labeled as cursed, unfortunate, and unlucky by the world- believes she isn't worthy of love. Shehryar Sultan: A boy who considers her as his entire world and loves her like breathing. A LOVE STORY THAT YOU CANT RESIST ✨️ Bitter Brownies by @author_lizz09