How will Connor feel when he is a fool for one of his best friends and the only person that knows about his secret it's not the boy he wanted to be the first one to know..

This is a film script that I have written but I wanted some opinions on it so here it is. I'm not very good at writing in book form so sorry, but if you want to still read the story, you must read it in it's script form. :D Thank You.

Zoe Sugg and Alfie Deyes are in a committed relationship. But what happens when Zoe's ex/abusive boyfriend shows up on her door step?