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some think pieces from my late afternoon mind drifting

[Written in Filipino and konting English] Kompilasyon ng mga mahahabang maiikling kwento, mga anik-anik, mga suka ng isa talagang bored na otistik, mga pighati habang naglalaslas, at iba pang mga walang kwentang kwento. Palakpakan!

Ana relives the same day over and over, dying in a bus crash on the way to Dalmvel. Things become more complicated when Deimus Avelar-the boy carrying a paper crane from her final moments-boards the bus, and the crash never comes. Date Started: July 3, 2025 Date Finished: October 30, 2025

THIS STORY IS WRITTEN IN TAGLISH The Head Housekeeper, "Madeline", does both clean and dirty job in a highly rated grand hotel, Casa Dela Muerte. Where she follows orders from her boss, Enzo Dela Muerte. Their shared connection were as dark as the hotel at nighttime and that association of theirs might bring harm to the Casa. Their fate is still blurry to the eyes of destiny. Bukod sa cliche Boss x Secretary trope, this one is full of very fun twists and turns. "In conversation, she spoke like a baroness" -Killer Queen, Queen Disclaimer: Mature themes such as violence, mental health, substance abuse.