short stories for criticism only

My first story! Its probably not going to be good, I've never done a VenturianTale fanfiction, but here one is! Johnny Ghost and Johnny Toast are seperated on a mission, how will they cope? Will they find each other? And when they do, what will happen? FYI I will never put OCs in this story. (I hope) It annoys me so much.

A not so simple world. A not so simple town. A not so simple radio host. A not so simple scientist. A not so simple love story. A collection of Cecilos One-Shots yay!

Edward Elric. The youngest state alchemist in history. The Fullmetal Alchemist. Edlyn Elric. The youngest state alchemist in history. The Fullmetal Alchemist. Worlds collide. When two souls who shouldn't be able to meet are sucked into the reality of the Universe, two worlds are put in peril. They have to fix what's broken and save their worlds. All while suffering the consequences of breaking the natural order of the Universe