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The Things They Never Said by BlazingDreams
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56 years down the road — chaos is the only thing anybody knows. With all resources gone and the government broken up, everybody runs freely. Society is nothing more than the broken flame of a dying fire, suppressing the people, stealing their voices, promoting violence for population control, forcing women to fall back on what we worked so hard to achieve. Many file in line, bowing their heads, looking the other way. Violators of the law above the age of eighteen are sentenced to death. Yet there is hope. La'Marck Jenkins never thought in a million years he would cross to the other side. He would grow up, go to work, drink away his sorrows. He didn't want to be the pushover his old man was, That is, until he met the mysterious street girl who would change everything. La'Marck had never been more wrong in his life. "Death row" Two words & two sides to the story. *Marked mature for explicit language*
Loki and Morgana: A Tale of Two Evils by mythandmagic
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After the events of The Avengers, Loki is brought back to Asgard, only to be cast out by Odin Allfather to Midgard (Earth). He is left powerless, and with only one form of communication back to Asgard. He meets the enigmatic Lady Morgana of Camelot, and is introduced to an entirely new world full of knights, dragons, and the odd relationship between a soon-to-be king and a legendary warlock.
Wildfire by bibliophily
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Just as many other seventeen year olds, Kylie has never truly felt like she fit in anywhere. Yet, for Kylie, it’s much more than the average teen angst over confusing boys and helicopter parents. She’s known for almost 10 years that she’s adopted, but it hasn’t been until the year leading up to her 18th birthday that she’s longed to figure out where she truly comes from. But when she opens the door to her ancestry, will she finally understand that family is based on those that are there for you not genes?
Heated Love Adventure by potatofag
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Nat and Bishop are a new couple, both each other's first love. While they explore how love works together, they realise it is not as easy as they thought. Love is just a part of life, not all of it.