Flowing silk dresses. Structured suits. Empty, forced vows. Soft, sweet nothings. Whispered caresses. Bittersweet kisses. Blue, blue eyes. This is not a love story. This is ruination. 🥀 Rosaline Beaumont. A name that once graced every tabloid, a face that used to be plastered all over social media. A girl that had all but disappeared. But now, four years after everything had turned to ashes in her grasp, she was back under the ever greedy gaze of the cameras, the watchful eyes of high society thirsting to watch their darling unravel. Standing at a wedding altar not of her choice, Rose was on the precipice of vowing to spend the rest of her life with a man she hardly knew. A deadly gamble. A hopeful new start. But could something new truly blossom, when the clutches of the past were dug so deep? Could she ever truly move on, when she couldn't close her eyes without dreaming of him? And could a marriage really last, when her heart would forever beat for another? 🥀 Completed on July 5, 2025.

Evangeline Birdlow, Abnegation born - discontent with her faction and craving the rush of freedom that being a part of Dauntless brings. With the choosing ceremony just around the corner - she decides to take matters into her own hands, sealing her fate with a single drop of blood - and unknowingly sending herself hurtling into a series of difficult choices regarding where her loyalties lie. \\\ °• The choosing ceremony now begins at eighteen years old, Evangeline takes the place of Tris in the story, but as you read, it's completely okay to see yourself as the character - it's intended, actually •° Side Note: Some of this will follow the story, but as it goes on, original parts are added/sprinkled in. I'm not just going to ask you to read the movie, lol.

Where stories are felt, not skimmed. 𝘙𝘦𝘢𝘭 𝘳𝘦𝘷𝘪𝘦𝘸𝘴. 𝘏𝘰𝘯𝘦𝘴𝘵 𝘸𝘰𝘳𝘥𝘴. 𝘕𝘰 𝘧𝘭𝘶𝘧𝘧-𝘫𝘶𝘴𝘵 𝘢 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘦𝘳 𝘸𝘩𝘰 𝘴𝘦𝘦𝘴 𝘺𝘰𝘶. I know what it feels like to put your story out there and wait-hoping someone gets it. Not just the plot, but the emotion behind it. I've been there too. That's why I created 𝗜𝘆𝗮'𝘀 𝗥𝗲𝘃𝗶𝗲𝘄𝘀. This isn't about surface-level praise or fast compliments. If I review your story, I'm showing up fully. I read with intention. I give feedback that's honest, direct, and meant to push you forward-not tear you down. I don't sugarcoat. I don't rush. I mean what I write. And if you're here for real growth and raw feedback from someone who truly cares about storytelling-you're in the right place. We're not here to play it safe. We're here to evolve. Let's grow together✨

Anastasia Kyrthessa , the youngest daughter of one of the five great Houses chosen to inherit the gods' divine powers, bears a cruel irony-she alone cannot seem to awaken hers, no matter how hard she tries. .Kyros(Kai) on the other hand seems to have it all -power, honor and glory. Though, they are miles apart, they hate each other a with a passion . In the halls of the Atherion Academy, she finds herself entangled with mysteries, political games and unwanted emotions .Will she be able to unravel her own secrets or fall prey to the masters to the houses ? Embark on the journey full of magic, rivalry, love , challenges , and magic to know the truths hidden behind the veil of mystery .