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Codebreaker [COMPLETED] tarafından Redbernwolf
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Bullied at school. Unloved at home. Renz Castaneda has always wanted to escape reality and one night, the online world gives him a chance to disappear for good. After mysteriously waking up inside the games and apps he once used to survive daily life, Renz finds himself reborn in a virtual universe ruled by powerful tech empires. There, he discovers comfort, purpose, and even love. But paradise comes at a cost. When his real-world body dies and he's trapped permanently in the digital realm, Renz becomes more than just a player. He becomes the system's most valuable code. As war brews between rival companies Cyberzone and XWeb, Renz learns the horrifying truth. His younger sister Kian has become a pawn in a deadly experiment to make the online world a permanent reality. To save her, Renz must face betrayal, unearth the secrets of his missing father, and choose between preserving his second life-or sacrificing everything for the sister he once left behind. In a world coded by control and illusion, one broken boy holds the key to rewriting everything. Date Started: May 26, 2024 Date Ended: July 5, 2024
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Between Danger And You (Completed) tarafından Aeritzcanaya
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Reynan swore he would never become like his criminal father until the girl he loves becomes the reason he might cross the line. *** Reynan was forced to shoulder the responsibilities his father left behind after being sent to prison. He witnessed how his father's crime ruined their family, and he swore to himself that he would restore their lost dignity. But no matter how hard he tries, people still judge him. They say he is just like his father, a violent person simply because of his fierce eyes and intimidating presence. Then a warning reaches him about his friend Alexis. She's in danger and he's the only one who could protect her. But protecting her means facing the one thing he has feared his entire life. What is the real danger behind the warning? And how far he is willing to go to protect her without becoming the very man he swore he would never be? This is Tagalog novel Originally started: July 2017 Re-written: January 7, 2021 Date Finished: January 12, 2021 Revision started: October 2025 Revision Finished: February 22, 2026
BEHIND THE VEIL (Reverie Series #2) tarafından Selamira_
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Faye Khataliya has always lived under her parents' shadow. A puppet with no voice, no choice, and no freedom. Every decision was made for her, every move controlled. But when she's forced into a marriage she never wanted, Faye finally gathers the courage to break free. On the day of her wedding, she runs-not just from the groom, but from the life they scripted for her.
Hometown Heartbeat tarafından saintressrai
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When a quiet bookworm finally steps out of her shell on vacation and falls for a mysterious local, she is devastated to find him gone without a trace, leaving her to choose between chasing a ghost or moving on alone.
Gravely Grim Gambits tarafından heihyunn
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"Dig deeper and you'll regret it." On a fateful night when Rui struggles to bury a haunting truth in the stillness of a moonlit cemetery, his heart races at the appearance of a bespectacled boy in pajamas-Jinro. Rui tries to distance himself from the boy's unsettling smile, but Jinro keeps approaching, their fates inexplicably intertwined by the strange task they shared that night. As Rui's unease grows, so does their connection, and beneath their encounter lurks a terrifying secret. Jinro's presence stirs something chaotic in him, an unsettling force that makes him want to run away and stay at the same time. With his emotions spiraling out of control, Rui soon finds himself drawn into a gravely grim gambit, a dangerous game of secrets and emotions, with one question gnawing at his mind: "Does he know?"
Default Title - Write Your Own tarafından mrsbakudeku
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If no one remembers you, did you ever live? tarafından weakdreamer
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Raya thrived on chaos and cruelty; even her own death was a weapon. She believed ending her life would be her ultimate victory⏤the moment Carlo broke, proof she is more than just a shadow. To hurt was to matter; to shatter others was to leave a mark. But the afterlife wasn't what she expected. The grave gave her no crown, no peace⏤only silence, only absence. From the void, she watches her body rise again with the soul of her murdered twin sister. Lira moves where Raya cannot and loves where Raya would only burn. Carlo mistakes that tenderness for hers, and Raya's final act unravels into mockery. She had thought herself unforgettable. Yet as she confronted her fading existence, struggling to escape a death no one knows, one question haunted her: if no one remembers you, did you ever live? *** Genre: Dark Fantasy/Psychological Horror/Supernatural Realism Language: English Status: Sealed in the Archive (Completed) Book Cover Illustrated by Chiko Lapengu
Hakbang Pabalik tarafından weakdreamer
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Isang sumpa na nabuo nang dahil sa pag-ibig. Isang pangakong ibinaon at binitiwan ilang daang taon nang lumipas ang patuloy na nanatili't hindi kumupas kailanman. Nabibigyan ba ng pangalawang pagkakataon ang tamang tao sa maling panahon? From a young age, Malia Rivera has been burdened with memories of the past because of her inborn ability to take a glimpse of people's past lives. Then she met Chase Rodriguez, the youngest business tycoon in the country-and the first person she met afflicted with a curse! Desperate to find answers to their predicament. These two souls burdened by the weight of the curse from the past joined hands, and Malia became the wife of the most sought-after man. Kaakibat ng kanilang pag-iisang dibdib ay magkasama nilang babaguhin ang nakatakdang trahedya mula sa sumpa na nagmula pa sa kanilang ninuno. *** Language: Tagalog, English Genre: Historical, Fantasy, Romance, Mystery Status: Part 1 Completed | Part 2 Coming soon
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Breathe Before the Fall tarafından castabelle
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[ COMPLETED ] Sports Series #2: Breathe Before the Fall Note: You can read this story as a standalone novel. ----- Elaine Aurora "Elora" Salvador is a ballerina chasing perfection. Suffocated by her mother's expectations, she learned that even on surface, she feels like she's forever drowning---forever sinking, with no one to save her. Until she met the one who makes her feel like she can breathe again. River Kyle Callahan is a champion swimmer desperate to escape his past. To him, Elora is completely off-limits. But getting closer to his bestfriend's sister makes the walls he built around himself slowly crumble, and he never expected to fall for the one person forbidden to him. Drawn together by a pain they both understand, they begin a secret love that could heal them or shatter their fragile worlds. But as they find solace in each other's broken pieces, they must learn that healing is a slow and painful dance. To survive, they'll first have to learn how to breathe before the fall. Start: June 11, 2025 Finished: December 17, 2025
Always in All Ways (RPG Series #1) | ✓ tarafından spinadirosal
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RPG Series #1 (Completed) ----- Kaiahagen Morado was just an average student. She wasn't the best in class, nor was she the person people sought after for group activities. But it was fine. It was perfectly fine--because no one can match her online. She was a beast in the hit MMORPG game, Balantagi. She was known as player "_kagemusha," the strongest amongst her guild with a whopping rank of 153 in the server. Then here came player "centimetreIX"--a new recruit to the guild. An extremely competitive guy, but also the sole reason why Kaiah even managed to survive the first few hellish months of college. He comforted and gave Kaiah courage when real life became unbearable. He was always there online waiting for her to join so they could play the game together. And because of this, Kaiah fell in love with him. She just fell for someone she just met on the internet. Enter Czar Mitchell Fabilian, her best friend's brother who just came home from New York. A guy who somehow fell in love with her over the course of her last semester in her third year of college. As nice and charming as Mitch was, Kaiah rejected him because of her hopeless love for someone who will never like her back, as Centi was already planning to confess to the love of his life. Days later, Centi announced his inactivity towards the game because of his broken heart--not knowing that the girl who rejected him in real life was the same girl who was secretly loving him online.
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