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The Raptor's Girl [Male Blue x OC x Male Indominus Rex] ✓ by xenoX323
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{ Currently being rewritten } "The kids? This will give the parents nightmares." Jurassic World. The place where dreams come to life, and where fantasy, isn't a fantasy anymore. Ever since John Hammond made dinosaurs become not extinct anymore from genetic material, we found a way to make them better, stronger, more teeth. I was one of the scientists that worked on the Jurassic World resort, where I helped the others make the dinosaurs. I was also known manly for helping Owen Grady with his raptors, Blue, Echo, Delta, and Charlie. Even though I was supposed to be helping Dr. Wu, I always seemed to have an connection with the raptors, but it seems like the raptors do to, cause everytime I visit, one seems to act differently. But when a new attraction is made, me along with Owen are chosen to meet it. But when we do, everything goes down hill. As the Idominus Rex wreaks havoc on the island, it's up to me, Owen, Clarie, Grey, Zach, and the raptors to bring peace back to the resort. But what happens when a certain raptor is stuck with me through it all when we are separated from the others and when the Indominus Rex takes a liking towards me. But when it's​ time to fight, will my raptor and I survive, or be killed to save the lives of everyone on Jurassic World. All credit goes to the maker of Jurassic World. Everything is not mine besides a few changed parts and Victoria. Also the raptors are males, including the ID.
The Taking by LoveScripter
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Every half century in a small little town hidden in the woods, a beast comes out from the forest to claim his bride on the night of an eclipse. The people of call this phenomenon "the taking". This beast is said to be very dangerous. It roams door to door searching for the woman whose being calls to his animal instincts. He will kill, mutilate and destroy everything in his path until he finds his bride. In the past, the townsmen have tried to hunt the creature and kill him before they can steal one of their marriageable daughters, but the beast does not hunt alone. He has followers among the shadows to make sure his goal is accomplished. Once he finds his bride, he carries her back to the forest where she is never seen or heard from again. Celeste believes this so-called "legend" is just some scary fairytale her grandmother made up to scare her. But was she ever wrong when a pair of moonlit eyes stared straight at her through her bedroom window and entered her room. Next thing she knew, she was being carried out the house and into the woods by a half-naked man who called her his. Who would have thought? Grandma wasn't crazy after all. Young Adult novel. Paranormal/Comedy-Romance @2014
Alpha Ryan ~ Yours Truly by AlmostPsycho
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He was very angry. He was looking at me like he wants to either rape me or punch my face. "I can expla- " He cuts me off. "You have been a very very bad kitty. You have no idea what I've been through." His grip on my neck tighten suffocating my food pipe. "Strip." The word brought me out of the electric shock. "Wha- " "I m counting till 3 if you didn't, I'll tear your clothes off - 1." Is this really happening? "2." I thought he was gay. "3." --------------------------------------------------- Emara, 21 years old human who disguises herself as a man to get a job in a Multinational company. But little she did know ... 1. The boss is smoking hot. 2. He is not human. 3. She is his mate. . What will happen when the Big Bad Wolf will meet his Mate? . How will he react knowing his mate is a Guy, not a Girl? . What will happen when the truth will flood out? Who will drown? Who will swim? ---------------------------------------------------- Highest Ranks: #4 in Werewolf on 13 March 2019 #3 in Boss on 18 March 2019 #1 in Alphamate on 5 April 2019 #1 in Humanmate on 6 April 2019 #1 in Twist on 17 April 2019 #1 in DarkFantasy on 20 June 2019 #1 in Dark on 1 August 2019 #4 in Badboy on 18 August 2019 #1 in Chicklit on 22 August 2019 #1 in Humor on 10 October 2019 #1 in CEO on 10 November 2019 #1 in Villain on 17 November 2019 #1 in Hot on 7 December 2019 #1 in Pack on 11 March 2020 #1 in FUNNY on 15 June 2020 #1 in Comedy on 21 June 2020 #1 in FirstStory on 8 February 2023 #1 in Adult on 24 May 2023 #1 in Wolf on 26 June 2023 #1 in SexScenes on 31 March 2024 #1 in Mate on 22 August 2024 #1 in Alpha on 25 August 2024 #2 in Werewolf on 20 April 2025 M A T U R E A U D I E N C E O N L Y
Mistaken  Identity by KittyPerera
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COMPLETED.Sam was the average 25 year old , hanging out with his buddies. His life suddenly changed when he was framed for theft and murder . Will he be declared innocent ? Or be in jail for the rest of his life ?
Mistaken Identity by goldie68
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Addaline Walker has just returned from a medical mission in the jungles of Guatemala. She spent two years there learning about the people, the culture and getting her heart broken by Sam, a player and doctor who only saw her as a notch in his bedpost. She is only home two days when the unthinkable happens, she is kidnapped by a big Scotish brute in a kilt saying that he is her bodyguard! Duncan MacKenzie is only trying to do the job his best friend Jackson hired him for! Protect Bethany Martin from a deranged killer who has been stalking the young actress and Jackson's love. He didn't realize that most of his job would entail keeping Beth protected from herself! Why was she at a spa three hours from their private cabin? Jackson owed him big time for this job!
Culmination by jjmonxx
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"Culmination" is a collection of four-line poems written by J. J. Mon. Published on Wattpad: April 9-17, 2020
Noël by caIebjames
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A mini poetry collection full of Christmas vibes! Merry Christmas! 🎄❄️
My Poetry | ✔ by ChloeKaydee
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These are all original (: this is a collection of my poems for when I have spare time to write them! * * * Thank you for all the reads, comments and votes! I love you all, please try stay positive :) Much love, Chloe xx * * * Cover: Oh my goodness, I made this so long ago now xD Highest rank : #112 in Poetry!
Stars are Often Lonely |poetry| by WriterBells
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for those who have forgotten their lights. for those standing alone in a crowd. for the stars that are often lonely. Status: Ongoing [ © 2019 / WriterBells ]
Unsaid words  by bonjourmofos
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"Words left unsaid speak the loudest." Highest #9 in poetry