Missbravo
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🚨 NOTICE • NOTICE • NOTICE 🚨
This version of the book will only stay up for about 5- 6 days. You're absolutely free to comment I would never stop you from doing that but I just wanted to let you know that after Collateral Hearts, I'll be working on this book's draft again.
That means many scenes will be rewritten, expanded, or changed, so a lot of the comments on specific moments may not match the story anymore.
However, there is one type of comment that I would genuinely love to receive.
Just like you all helped me while I was rewriting Collateral Hearts, please point out eveything you feel needs improvement.
Tell me if a relationship feels underdeveloped, if a scene is confusing, if you have questions about the storyline, if the pacing feels off, or if something doesn't make sense. Those comments help me far more than you know.
The good thing is that I'm not rushing this rewrite anything, I want to take my time and make this story the best version of itself, so you have plenty of time to share your thoughts and feedback.
I just wanted to let you all know in advance that this version is only temporary and thank you for always helping me make my stories better.
❝ जिस पे रखे तुमने क़दम अब से मेरा भी रास्ता है... जैसे मेरा तुमसे कोई पिछले जनम का वास्ता है... ❞
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