Sweet133
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"Rayne..." Miranda said, head tilting in curiosity, "can Mommy see what you've made?"
I hesitated, suddenly getting nervous.
Then I nodded and stood aside.
She leaned in slightly, her gaze moving slowly across the page. She didn't speak right away, and every second of silence made my stomach twist tighter.
I waited for corrections.
For critique.
For neutrality.
Instead, she straightened.
"This," Miranda said calmly, "is excellent."
I blinked. "It is?"
"Yes."
This is a spin-off to my first story Little Maid :)
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