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Taken by the Vikings (ON HOLD, REWRITING) на Anastasia_Mikaelson
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Their 18th birthday was the day that would change the twin sisters, Caroline and Elizabeth's lives forever. It was the day they would become women in the eyes of society, and the day their parents would choose the man they were to marry. It was always the plan that they would live and die on the island they were born on, but the world had different plans. On the day of their coming of age ceremony, people see strange ships sailing on the horizons coming for their island. It was the Vikings, and they were here for the girls. *** Started: Feb. 12, 2015
Wicked Game на Anonymous_Beauty
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"This… is a tragic day for all, And trust me when I say… that the government is doing everything in its power to keep our citizens safe. Not just the citizens of the United States, but the citizens of the home we call Earth. "We are doing everything we can, but I am sorry to say… that we our powerless… against the wrath of Mother Nature. According to several trained meteorologists, the situation will only spiral." What happens when even after the average life of teenager Alana Vender is torn apart, and she's scrambled to put the pieces back together, fate comes to destroy the imperfect picture she's managed to make? Follow Alana through this heart wrenching story of tragedy, adventure, love, heartbreak, and self discovery as she stumbles through the cruel joke fate is playing on her. Ill update a chapter a day with always a sneak peak of the next chapter.
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