Stories to be Critique (Genuine)
13 stories
The Psychopath Reincarnation  by Acir_knight
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We all hear about second chances. But does everyone deserve one? What if that second chance is given to a psychopath? Reincarnation is supposed to be a good thing, but reincarnation gone wrong.We witness the terrifying experiment,where right and wrong don't matter, and everything is a game with life or death as the prize.
I Still Love You The Most by meibjne
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I met him on the darkest day of my life. He became my comfort, my warmth, my happiness. But because of my mistakes, I lost him. I lost the man that I loved the most. "I still miss you every day, Makoy," muli ko siyang tiningnan sa huling pag kakataon. "At kahit na wala ka na sa buhay ko, I still love you the most."
Scenery of trauma by chaeyellie
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Two prominent families, both aiming to elevate their businesses and reputations, decide to join forces in an unexpected collaboration. However, things take an unforeseen turn when their children, a model and a billionaire, cross paths. Neither of them anticipated the intense interaction that followed, nor did they expect to reconnect after a week of silence. It's as if fate stepped in, proving that if you're meant to meet someone, it'll happen, no matter when or where. The model, known for her beauty and status, has a spicy, unexpected encounter with the billionaire-someone who's both intimidating and undeniably attractive. Their parents aren't even close, making this connection all the more unexpected. The woman, however, is carrying the weight of deep, unacknowledged trauma that her parents have never addressed. Her trust issues are massive, built from years of pain, but somehow, this billionaire begins to break through. Despite her fears, she starts to trust him, and over time, falls for him during their engagement. But as they grow closer, the complexity of their relationship begins to unravel. What consequences will they face? What challenges will test their bond? Let's see what happens next in their tangled, high-stakes lives.
Rise and Shine #2: Kiss Me Under The Shade  by penship737
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Rise and Shine #1: Meet Me In The Middle by penship737
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My Master and I [My's and I's Series #1] (COMPLETE) by miss_sanaall
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She's a brutal talker. He's an ice king. They hate each other, but a secret ties them together. Katty Serafin is known as "The Villainess" because her arrogance and sharp-tongued insults keep everyone at a distance. Her bad reputation is her armor; she uses her tongue as a weapon so no one can hurt her first. Russelle Fontanilla is the CEO whose cold control makes him feared. He values order and despises Katty's chaos, as her aggression reminds him of an old regret he can't shake. When a shared secret forces them to live under one roof, they must adopt a new, strange dynamic: a Master and Pet relationship. As they are forced to live together, Katty discovers that Russelle's cold exterior hides a core of profound devotion, while he realizes her arrogance is just a desperate defense. This is a story about how their worst enemy becomes the only person who can see their truth. Can two people built on hate ever surrender to love? ___ Book Cover was illustrated by: IEC creations wp ___ Status: Complete (2021-2023) Under Revision (2025-20**) ___ Plagiarism is a Crime
Breathe Before the Fall by castabelle
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[ COMPLETED ] Sports Series #2: Breathe Before the Fall Note: You can read this story as a standalone novel. ----- Elaine Aurora "Elora" Salvador is a ballerina chasing perfection. Suffocated by her mother's expectations, she learned that even on surface, she feels like she's forever drowning---forever sinking, with no one to save her. Until she met the one who makes her feel like she can breathe again. River Kyle Callahan is a champion swimmer desperate to escape his past. To him, Elora is completely off-limits. But getting closer to his bestfriend's sister makes the walls he built around himself slowly crumble, and he never expected to fall for the one person forbidden to him. Drawn together by a pain they both understand, they begin a secret love that could heal them or shatter their fragile worlds. But as they find solace in each other's broken pieces, they must learn that healing is a slow and painful dance. To survive, they'll first have to learn how to breathe before the fall. Start: June 11, 2025 Finished: December 17, 2025
My Step Daughter (Volume l) by Adiluvsme
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What We Lost In October (Completed) by panulat_ni_rizal
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BERMONTHS SERIES #1 The more you hide it, the more it will haunt you. Zairene Legado, a Fine Arts major specializing in Photography, finds herself falling in love with his best friend, Rixton Hernandez, who is taking up Political Science. Zairene has always hated rejection, it's a feeling she never wanted to experience. When her feelings for Rixton begin to grow, she tries to suppress them. But the more she pushes them away, the more deeply connected she feels to him. Eventually, she realizes that she doesn't want to lose him. Yet, fear grips her, what if he doesn't feel the same? At one moment, everything changes. And the love she was too afraid to share becomes a ghost of what could they have been. Little did she know, that Rixton also lost her. It's not material things that they have lost --- it's each other. And that's what they lost in the month of October. Date Started: April 10, 2025 Date Ended: July 17, 2025