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Thou Shalt Not Flirt | BxB by angryCrayons
angryCrayons
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[BxB] [spicy] [indianmc] "Kiss me properly," he demands. "I don't want to!" I snap, "I want to touch your hair!" I really did like his gold hair. Maybe I was in love with his conditioner. Was there a sexuality for that? He just looks confused. "Oh...okay." He tilts his head down for me. I touch it again, then let go and look away. "What?" he says. I'm not sure what to say to him, except that I want to exchange saliva with him again, but I don't want to ask for it since he looks amused and like he'll make fun of me. "Want to touch my arms again too?" he offers. "You're stupid. That's stupid. No I don't." Yes I do. ~~~ Indra never asked for a stepdad, much less a churchgoing one. But now he's stuck spending every Sunday pretending to enjoy it while his mom smiles politely and Patrick tries to get the new pastor to join their fantasy football league. Enter: Jaron Ashcomb - the pastor's son. Golden-haired, polite, painfully perfect. The kind of guy who makes friends instantly and doesn't laugh when Indra says "Asscomb" out loud. Indra's just trying to survive awkward mingling, dodge emotional vulnerability, and maybe finish a decent drawing without someone confiscating his pen. Too bad Jaron smells like expensive soap and looks like the sketchbook crush Indra definitely isn't allowed to have. Updates every Friday at 8 PM PDT :)
Wannabe by JessicaGagnon
JessicaGagnon
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When her crew is arrested, Maddie is left alone and homeless in New York City. With nothing to fall back on, she does the only thing she's ever been good at, lying. She manages to con her way into Brighton Academy, one of the city's most prestigious private schools. Overnight, Maddie builds a new identity and slips into a world of money, power, and unspoken rules. All she has to do is stay invisible. That plan falls apart when she draws the attention of the three girls who run the school: Vivienne, Adriana and Poppy. She also finds herself torn between two very different boys: Jake, a charming golden boy who represents everything her new life promises, and Carter, a rebellious outsider who sees through her act and threatens to unravel the persona she's worked so hard to build. As the pressure mounts, Maddie must decide how far she's willing to go to become somebody else. And whether belonging in a world that was never meant for her is worth losing the person she truly is. Romance/Drama/Comedy
TO BE WITH YOU OR WITHOUT YOU by QUEEN3112
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The unique besties of Haxby town- A damsel and a Madame! Astrid Tate- The young, sweet teenager adored by the entire town for her polite smile and delicious cakes. It was her dream to turn passion into a reality with just a simple catch. That her future should not be anywhere near the lanes of Haxby. The shadow of her messy home was lethal enough to burnaway any hope. Also, the icing on the cake of her miseries was her hidden past! So, she stuck to the plan. The one, she build with her best friend who was faraway living her dreams. Melissa Brown- The diva that the Highschool thought it would never really have but dearly missed when she ran after her goal faster than a bullet train! Most peculiar thing remembered about the fashionista was her die-hard bond with the school's shy and boring valedictorian candidate. For many they made no sense. But for Mel, that bond was a source of happiness in her life. And so betrayed by destiny, she returned home, only to her biggest shock! Follow the journey of the two friends as they battle secrets and lies to reach for the stars that shine beyond the limits of their courage. Will the past win or the unexpected surprises will turn their lives on a new path? Only story will tell :) UPDATE EVERY WEDNESDAY.