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Billionaire Romance  by authorzoya_
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What happens when a ruthless CEO falls for the one woman who disrupts his perfect world - with laughter, chaos, and a little too much cold coffee? Kabir Khan - the name alone sends shivers through boardrooms. A man of control, precision, and zero tolerance for distractions. Alia Siddiqui - a whirlwind of sarcasm, emotion, and heart. The only woman who dares to challenge him... and wear his hoodie while stealing his herbal tea. When fate brings them together on a business trip to Paris, neither expects late-night confessions, rooftop cuddles, and stalking-through-malls-in-Armani kind of feelings. But love? It's never just about fairytales. As meetings turn into memories and bangles become promises, Kabir and Alia find themselves tangled in something much deeper - a connection that threatens their perfectly guarded lives. Add in a gang of chaotic siblings, Nutella therapy, jealousy arcs, and stolen moments under the Paris stars... and you've got a love story that's sweet, savage, and unforgettable.
Second Chance Romance by SereneMarche
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💌 Second Chance Romance by Serene Marche "They were arranged by their parents, but their hearts had already made the deal years ago." Tim Bradford and Lucy Chen only saw each other as friends. But one summer after high school, everything changed. It ended just as quickly, torn apart by distance, pride, and heartbreak they never truly recovered from. Years later, their paths cross again. Only this time, it's not by chance-it's by arrangement. Bound by a childhood pact made by their parents, they're suddenly engaged, promised to one another by tradition. It should feel forced. It should feel strange. But instead... it feels familiar. Because beneath all the silence, the years, and the pain-they never stopped being each other's always. Now sharing a home, a future, and a history full of unresolved feelings, Lucy and Tim must navigate a new beginning wrapped in old emotions. Can a love they thought was lost find its way back-this time, not by accident... but by choice?
Looking for a Beta Reader? Here's How I Help Writers by Mason_Fawaz
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Hi writers 👋 I'm a beta reader offering honest, reader-focused feedback to help you improve pacing, tension, and overall engagement. If you want to know why readers stop reading or what makes them stay this is for you. 📩 DM me if you want a fresh reader's perspective.
Freedom Fantasy by Banshilol
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In 2030, Bryan Voss was just trying to enjoy a long-overdue quiet return home. But in a world already ravaged by the Third World War, peace was fragile. One afternoon, a blinding light split the sky, tremors shook the ground, and everything changed. Overnight, foreign nations vanished. The stars appeared wrong. Satellites fell silent, and beyond the borders, only wilderness remained. As the U.S. scrambles for answers, reconnaissance flights uncover stranger things-castles, medieval cities, and winged creatures no science can explain. Thrown into a reality turned upside down, Bryan must navigate a world where survival no longer follows the rules he once knew. What to Expect: - A soldier-led, military-heavy isekai inspired by GATE and Japan Summons - Immersive worldbuilding - Not a harem or chick-magnet story - Male lead is a career soldier-disciplined, loyal, and grounded - His focus isn't on glory or romance, but on doing his duty and making it back home to his family - No fixed upload schedule yet-chapters are released when they're ready
Tainted Hearts| A 🇯🇲 Romance Novel📚   by Mrsauthor_
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"So, when are you going to give me a chance?" I asked, referencing the unrequited feelings that had lingered since high school. After a brief pause, a sly smile spread across her face. "How about... next... never," she teased, before leaning in to kiss my cheek. With that, she got out of the car and left me stunned.. *~•~•~* In the complex world of high school, students navigate a delicate balance of academics, social relationships, and personal growth. For Kyomi, a British transfer student, this new environment is a chance to heal and rediscover herself. Having lost her best friend and brother, Kyomi's bubbly personality gave way to introversion. However, as she settles into her new life in Jamaica, she begins to form strong bonds and find joy again. That is, until she meets him - a captivating and wealthy schoolboy who unwittingly captures her heart. As Kyomi delves deeper into his world, she uncovers a startling truth: her crush is the next Don, and his family is eerily connected to her painful past. Jah'Mari, the charming footballer, is the eldest son of a powerful family. Reserved and observant, he guards his emotions, one thing is certain - their love will be tested by jealousy, secrets, pain, heartbreak, and drama.
𝐑𝐨𝐦𝐚𝐧𝐜𝐞 & 𝐒𝐦𝐮𝐭 𝐒𝐡𝐨𝐫𝐭 𝐒𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐢𝐞𝐬 by Marigold_7
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This book contains a mixture of smut, angst, and other plots. Enjoy reading!
Flickers of Romance by KRzy901
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One heart, many fantasies. Dive into a whirlwind anthology where each chapter is a standalone story-each one pairing with a different celebrity in a unique tale of romance, tension, and desire. From slow-burn connections on movie sets to unexpected encounters on tour buses, from cozy domestic fluff to steamy midnight rendezvous, every chapter offers a new taste of love and lust under the spotlight. Whether it's stolen kisses with a brooding actor behind the scenes, a friends-to-lovers moment with a chart-topping singer, or a forbidden fling with a co-star during press tours-each story is rich with emotion, chemistry, and unforgettable moments. Genres: Romance • Fluff • Smut • Drama • Slice of Life Tropes: Friends to lovers, enemies to lovers, forbidden romance, fake dating, slow burn, one bed, secret relationship, love at first sight, and SO MUCH MORE!!!
Earned It (Dark Romance) by lunacaracotob
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"So... where were you, little kitty?" His voice was quiet, too quiet... each word slicing through the air as he flipped through the papers without even looking up. "I-I was..." My voice broke, barely a whisper. Something about his calm made him even scarier. He finally set the papers aside, eyes lifting to meet mine. "You look nervous." The corner of his mouth twitched.. not quite a smile. "Don't be. I don't hurt good boys." That tone... gentle, dangerous, patient. "Now," he said, leaning back in his chair, gaze steady. "Come here." I hesitated, taking one step forward. His eyes sharpened. "Crawl." ●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●
𝐒𝐢𝐧𝐟𝐮𝐥 𝐓𝐞𝐦𝐩𝐭𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧 : 𝐀 𝐛𝐚𝐝 𝐛𝐨𝐲 𝐫𝐨𝐦𝐚𝐧𝐜𝐞 by DarkLove_Angel
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Isabelle Grace, a beautiful and innocent girl stepped into one of the top university with dreams of living a better future. Alexander Luca Romano, the rebellious bad boy of the university, with a dangerous aura and charming looks, a playboy who loves to toy with girl's and then throw them away. what will happen When Alexander's dark gaze locks onto Isabelle's innocence, a dangerous desire stirs within him. He becomes consumed by the need to possess her, cage her and claim her as his own. Will Isabelle break free from the cage of Alexander's obsession and find true love, or will she be trapped in a life of suffering? Trigger warning:- 18+ content, violence, abuse, forced relationship, smut.
Illicit Romance  by amrletlogae
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VALENTINE SERIES 03 | TAGLISH Juliana Shane Jimenez, the bubbly fashionista and cheerleading captain, is envied by everyone. Many dream of being in her shoes because she is close to the heirs of the well-known Valentine family. What will happen if one of the oldest female heirs of the Valentine family develops feelings for her?