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"You either play by the rules, or you die."
Grace Ridley's main purpose in life is soccer. She plays on the field like her life depends on it, but what happens when her life literally hangs in the balance?
A threatening note is left outside her dorm. She feels someone watching her during soccer practices.
Soon she learns she has to choose between playing by the rules or playing with integrity.
Appleton Hall, the prestigious university in Boston, is the place where every soccer protégé, competitive academic, or rich kid of private billionaires wants to be. But danger and secrets are hiding within the beautifully haunting Appleton Hall.
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✨️short thrilling chapters🤯😏
✨️dangerous secret societies🤐💣
✨️a sweet romantic subplot💋💌❤️🔥
✨️a fierce, strong female lead🌟⚡️🔥⚽️
DISCLAIMER: This is an unedited first draft. I am sharing this so I keep writing forward instead of getting stuck with perfectionism. I want to build this story with community to hear what's working and what needs strengthening. You are my beta readers, enthusiastic fans, and constructive critics who get to witness the good, the bad, and the ugly of writing a story I absolutely love! I'm so excited to go on this journey with you!
Trigger Warnings:
Violence: mild thriller violence, blackmail, murder/threats/fear.
Romance: kissing, handholding, flirting, longing, and attraction - nothing explicit.
Language: No explicit language
Age: 15+
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Rankings:
#1 in #unedited (8/22/26)
#1 in #firstdraft (8/22/26)
#4 in #sportsfiction (8/22/26)
#5 in #secretsocieties (8/22/26)
#8 in #cleanromance (8/22/26)