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Soulless Creature by marsy7
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You're not supposed to fall in love with the damned. Lucy doesn't live a happy life. Between school, her loneliness, and her abusive father, it's a struggle to keep her head above water. It should've been a fresh start when Lucy moves to a new school. While it's fresh, it's far from normal - especially when Drake, a sinister yet irresistible guy, keeps getting in her way. Soon after, eerie deaths begin to occur around the town and no one can explain them. They aren't regular murders and there is no evidence. Lucy begins to be suspicious of the red-haired boy at her new school. Is Drake just a beautiful, vulnerable guy with captivating eyes and a horrible past? Or could he be something more? Could the burning animosity in his eyes be lethal? THIS BOOK HAS BEEN PUBLISHED ON AMAZON. THE LINK IS ON MY PROFILE. Cover done by @_kaylaxmarie
Blood Ties Part 1 by its_Lorraine39
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Mia Johnston had been adopted when she was a baby, her adoptive family was alright but she never really fit in with them, then one day after her sweet sixteen party she got the surprise of her life when she turned into a werewolf. Then one day at school a mysterious stranger comes along and changes her life forever. She's suddenly thrust into a world she didn't even know existed at an academy for werewolves, then a vampire comes along and tells her she's a part of two powerful lines and making her question everyone around her. Now she doesn't know who she can trust. Then once she thinks she has all the answers she finds out she has a twin brother out there somewhere.
Heated Love Adventure by potatofag
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Nat and Bishop are a new couple, both each other's first love. While they explore how love works together, they realise it is not as easy as they thought. Love is just a part of life, not all of it.