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Accursed Wars of Immortalis oleh DavidIslander
Accursed Wars of Immortalis
DavidIslander
  • Bacaan 694
  • Undian 80
  • Bahagian 22
Every so often, demons from the Realm of Chaos invade the realm of the living, claiming many victims with claw, fire, or curse. The Third Outbreak, the first to spread across the entire north-western land, resulted in all-out war for over a decade. Humanity rode to battle against thousands of demons, and the conflict culminated into a single battle at the source of the evil. Many were involved in the conflict, from legendary warriors such as Chaosbane Akarin, to the offspring of farmers such as Flann of Mirth. Arthen of Richter, historian, collected several journals and conducted interviews with survivors of the Outbreak, to improve our understanding of the demons and the Realm of Chaos. ***Feedback needed! -- Revision complete!*** Entry 1: Fate or Luck The first part of the tale of Flann, one of the many victims of the Outbreak who was cursed and condemned to the hellish native realm of the demons . There she would remain until their day of salvation. Entry 2: Mirth Amidst War Upon her rescue from the Realm of Chaos, Flann joined the fight alongside the Legionnaires of Light, a sacred order of warriors and priests who exist to fight Chaos. She hopes to save as many innocent people as she can from the clutches of the demons, but she must fight for her own life as well as that of her childhood friend and partner Walgen. War rages on and countless lives have been lost. Only time knows whether they fall to the ever-oppressing feeling of doom, or the claws of demons. ***Further entries will be added, but not for some time. I would like some feedback on my prose. Constructive criticism wanted! Please note any mistakes through private message. A NOTE: In this world, the sun rises to the west, not east as it does on Earth. I did this on purpose because I felt like it. That's it. Enjoy!***
Concrete Rose oleh solander
Concrete Rose
solander
  • Bacaan 114
  • Undian 10
  • Bahagian 3
Abriel has finally convinced her uncle to let her join his force, but not for the reason he has in mind. she goes undercover on a dangerous mission, in which she'll have to deal with the most powerful mob boss in recent history, and her own inner demons. Will Dontè be able to help her find her mother's killer? Or will his obsession with her get in the way? Abriel decides to play with his fire but will she end up burned in the process.
{ON HOLD} LIVING AFTER LIFE  oleh Ice-rocks0990
{ON HOLD} LIVING AFTER LIFE
Ice-rocks0990
  • Bacaan 979
  • Undian 81
  • Bahagian 8
Zombies. Such a funny word, that. Zombies. They are a thing of fiction. At least, they used to be but not anymore. Now, my world is plagued by the walking dead. Gone are the days where I burrow my frightened head behind a throw pillow while I watch The Walking Dead with my family. The T.V show, if I must clarify, not the weird dead things doing an odd mix of the shuffle and the box step outside my window right now. Their arms thrown out in front of them for stability - giving them a frankinstein-ish look, minus the bolts in the head - while they try to break into my locked house with their unresponsive limbs in an attempt to crack open my skull and munch on my juicy brains. Too graphic? I apologize. I'd like to say I've survived the zombie apocalypse and lived to tell the tale, but I can't. Because I'm smack-dab in the middle of it. So if you're looking for a sweet romance about love, loss and redemption, then you're sorely mistaken. This is about living after life as we knew it has ended. AMAZING COVER MADE BY @thiefs_
Just Say It oleh BlueBreeze88
Just Say It
BlueBreeze88
  • Bacaan 2,908
  • Undian 123
  • Bahagian 23
Words that are left unsaid tend to be more important. But what would happen if you spoke the unspoken? Would your life turn upside down? Stacy Kline is your average person that has a class of her own, fits in with any group and is nice to everyone. As summer starts and her last year of highschool has ended Stacy gets ready to take on the world. But when Blake Rackley moves in a few doors down, she is given the friendship of a life time. Blake Rackley is that one friend that can get on your nerves so much that you want to rip their head off, but in the end that anger is nothing compared to the love you have for them. Blake's care free spirit is what catches Stacy's eye. As the season begins both people don't realize that this summer just might be the summer that changes everything.
Whispers Of Spilt Blood oleh WoodNymphWarrior
Whispers Of Spilt Blood
WoodNymphWarrior
  • Bacaan 25,260
  • Undian 2,853
  • Bahagian 28
"In the end, death waits for no one." When Reagan Ortega's brother is accused of killing an innocent man, Reagan knows something is wrong. Her dependable brother, Rick, a murderer? Impossible. Yet all evidence points to the contrary, and to a possible death penalty. Determined to prove his innocence, Reagan soon finds that there may be more at stake than Rick's life. As she begins to uncover dangerous secrets, she finds that some people will do whatever it takes to keep the truth buried. A truth that may reveal the death penalty to be more than an ending. With suspicions of government corruption, shady cops watching her every move, and questionable alliances with wanted criminals, Reagan may just be buried along with the truth. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Cover by @_kaylaxmarie