Just something I wrote in Creative Writing Club that made my teacher cry. Probably just a one shot. So give it a shot?

Ever since Basia lost her mother at the age of 5, her father and brother became her abusers. She made a vow never to talk to a man after that. They weren't trust worthy. After twelve years of putting up with that, she manages to escape and runs away to California. Where everything is different. She goes into her senior year, and is captivated by a group of students, more specifically, Callum; her tattooed Vampire. Will he make her talk for the first time in years? Or will his secret ruin everything?