Stories I Critiqued
12 stories
Rockstar Serenade: The Chorus by Kerosene_hearts
Rockstar Serenade: The Chorus
Kerosene_hearts
  • Reads 10,844
  • Votes 646
  • Parts 48
This book takes us back to five years after The Verse, where Kailey is now the lead singer of Flame Alyconia, a post hardcore band skyrocketing to fame. Trevor, although being the lead guitarist of his own band Irony Affairs, is full of frustrations. Same pursued dreams, but different paths taken. Meeting old friends who share the same line of career is inevitable for the famous rockstars. Trevor develops a feeling of immense rivalry towards Kailey's band, but as he chases for their fame, he realizes that he is chasing something else. What could one expect when their roads cross once more, when a dark secret from the past is lurking just around the corner? Will there be a second chance for love? Note: * This book contains mature language and sexual content (in the later chapters). You have been warned. Rockstar Serenade Trilogy Book 2: The Chorus © All Rights Reserved cover by @eecA_V
A Kidnapper's Dream (Unedited) by Prettylikeapoem
A Kidnapper's Dream (Unedited)
Prettylikeapoem
  • Reads 82,019
  • Votes 2,349
  • Parts 29
~A Kidnapper's Dream~ Once Upon A Time... There were no princesses or princes. There were no knights in shinning armor. There were no dragons to be slayed. There was a twenty-two-year-old woman named Jessalyn and it seemed like God hated her. When Jessalyn was little her parents mysteriously disappeared and a few years later she was almost murdered, but instead she was left disfigured. This was all because of the man who saved her that night, a man who left so quickly that she couldn't even see his face. Now, when Jessalyn is all grown up she's given up on everything in her life and she ends up being kidnapped. At first, Jessalyn thinks it's like Hell on Earth with her strange kidnapper, but slowly she starts to rethink it. Will Jessalyn let her emotions get the best of her? -Amazing cover by: @crazycherries Story takes places in the Victorian Era.-
Epitome of an Underdog by coffeencigarettes
Epitome of an Underdog
coffeencigarettes
  • Reads 4,016
  • Votes 179
  • Parts 3
Drugs, power and hatred have ruled Cole's life for the past 17 years. Seeking escape from a secret that could put him behind bars, Cole sets out searching for his father in Manhattan, hoping he will save him from an uncertain future. Fueled by only rumors and a desire to free himself from the bonds his life has created, Cole is willing to stop at nothing to get away.
Errand Runners by Next_JK_Rowling
Errand Runners
Next_JK_Rowling
  • Reads 327,701
  • Votes 20,638
  • Parts 46
[Check out BOUNTY HUNTERS, the sequel to Errand Runners] Unlike the other criminals in Nova City, Nole Vale has a curfew. While most civilians just want to survive in their crime-ridden, gang-infested city, this sixteen-year old is determined to conquer the city streets and provide for his brother and sister by any means necessary. But after crashing into a mysterious teenager, Nole is suddenly accused of a crime he didn't commit and his stable way of life begins to crumble. With the help of a diverse, yet peculiar group of teenagers, he must navigate his way through lethal gangs, brutal City Enforcers, and a corrupt city system in order to clear his name and keep himself and his siblings alive. Cover by @sequester All rights reserved. All material in this book (Errand Runners), and everything on this account is, unless otherwise stated, the property of the owner, creator and author of this work (@Next_JK_Rowling). Copyright and other intellectual property laws protect these materials. Reproduction or retransmission, in whole or in part, or in any manner, without the prior written consent of the copyright holder is a violation of the Copyright, Patents and Design Act of 1988 law and is punishable by law.
The Way She Feels by intimaterebellion
The Way She Feels
intimaterebellion
  • Reads 1,202
  • Votes 37
  • Parts 5
What happens when a suicidal girl meets a boy whose younger sister recently killed herself? Alina Reynolds is frustrated at the world, and Salvatore Lombardi is just plain frustrated. Between family issues, friend issues, and school issues, both are ready to call it quits. But when the two meet in a therapist's waiting room, they click -- though not in the way you'd expect. While arguing about the meaning of life and everything in between, the troubled teens slowly start to fall for each other. However, will love be enough to save a life?
The Craters in the Moon by jetaime26
The Craters in the Moon
jetaime26
  • Reads 6,447
  • Votes 345
  • Parts 13
Arden Gray: A catty, beautiful, endlessly underestimated teenage girl drowning in a crippling tidal wave of depression. She spends more time in the realm of books than reality, and struggles to keep her head above water as her world seemingly comes crashing down around her. Lucas Riverton: The seventeen year old boy in the awkward stage between child and adulthood, who works at a local bookstore as a means of escape. He barely knows Arden, but is positive that there is something about her, something he wants to devote the rest of his life to figuring out. Two worlds connect in an unfathomable force as young lovers relish in the discovery of a feeling that is beyond description--- and do everything in their power to prevent the inevitable destruction of it. ~~ REVIEWS ~~ "A poignant story about the deterioration of love between two young teenagers that don't know anything but how to fall." "...flawless, simple, and very imaginative." "This is a wonderful, angsty story...read in one sitting!" "Arden Gray is a unique and quirky character that I found myself growing attached to right away...This author manages to pack more emotion in one sentence of dialogue than most people can in a whole paragraph of metaphorical description."
Rewired by BeastBMady
Rewired
BeastBMady
  • Reads 1,020
  • Votes 134
  • Parts 6
My name is Colby, and I was born in a test tube. Beyond that, I don't know what or who I am...but I'm begining to think there's more to my past than those around me would have me believe.
Kiss of the Arctic: A Vampire/Werewolf Romance (COMING SOON) by NicholeWolfe
Kiss of the Arctic: A Vampire/Werewolf Romance (COMING SOON)
NicholeWolfe
  • Reads 1,792
  • Votes 42
  • Parts 4
Being unique isn't all it's cracked up to be. It's a trap waiting to go off. A target on your back. A reason to run. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- When Kayline Delaney gets engaged, you'd think it would be a happy occasion. But you'd be wrong. Because her betrothed is no prince charming. He's the nightmare that stalks your dreams and relishes your screams. Signing the Mating Contract may have saved her pack, but it could destroy her... Rogue vampire, Raul Carter, has given up on ever finding his mate. After centuries of failure, he's resigned himself to a life of solitude. And then he finds her in the most unlikely of places. But she's on the run from someone that makes her pale face go white. Choosing him could mean the total annihilation of her pack and her family. Can they find a way or was their love doomed to fail from the start? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- In the exciting third installment, the stakes heat up as much as the bedsheets. Vampires, shifters, witches, and war combine in an action-packed and super-steamy ride. Author's Note: This book contains graphic violence and explicit sexual scenes not suitable for those under the age of 18.
Nine Lives by Cup1dsLov3
Nine Lives
Cup1dsLov3
  • Reads 2,884
  • Votes 140
  • Parts 9
Every soul must taste… Death! Kahn Lancer, being the successor to his father’s kingdom and Death’s throne, is out to tie a loose end – Lexa Drayton. The same Lexa Drayton meant to die tewnty years ago, the same Lexa Drayton who somehow manages to survive Death’s attempts to suck her soul out of her body. Call these strokes of luck, flukes, blessings or even good fortunes but Death does not like to be cheated. Will Lexa keep on running for the rest of her life or will Death finally have his way and snatch her soul away from her? How much time does she have before the sand in her hour glass actually runs out? Copyrighted to Kiara Matthews - All rights reserved. Many Thanks to @Pikimonchu for the new description! :D A new friend for life :D
The Reason Were Together by LovrHatrBtch
The Reason Were Together
LovrHatrBtch
  • Reads 652
  • Votes 31
  • Parts 11
Summary: A alter-equine named Malisha /Milly finds her mate in her school. It’s her hot, new, young teacher, Maliki. It’s against Maliki’s will to be with Malisha, nonetheless, to not have her family accept him. Malisha’s family is actually fine with her being with him;but because he’s her teacher its only for the sake of letting her have her mate. Will Maliki accept Milly?Or will he deny her!Read and find out.