Unfinished book I've tried writing whilst travelling to work. Please let me know any feedback or help you may have thanks.

" A memory flashing through oblivion. Headlights piercing my eyes in the middle of the woods, it's raining like it would never stop, I see her smiling at me, sitting in the car, clutching the steering wheel. And then the gunshot. And then nothing. A blind spot in my perfect memory. Or a daunting nightmare in my whirling head. It's hard to tell what this is. All I know is, I didn't just lose a sister. I lost myself. And I haven't been the same since. " Reece Whitney is a maniac now, drowning in the sorrow of her sister's murder, seeing things that never happened. She believes she was there in the woods when her sister, Olivia was shot dead. But she wasn't. And all through the way, she's trying to figure out how she can have a memory of something she didn't witness? But crazy little Reece has a lot to learn. About Olivia, about everyone around her, about the killer,and most peculiarly, about herself.