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The Exchange Student by repswiftly
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[Warning! Not edited!] We just got the news, that five people from our class would be allowed to have an exchange student come over from England. I was thrilled when I heard the news, and I really wanted to be one of them five. Luckily, my wish came true and I was one of the five, but what I didn't expect is to have the most snobby, self-centred, jerk for my British Exchange Student. Jace Nicholls, the very classy (so he thinks he is) British boy that I am stuck with for a week, worse is, that he has to stay in my house. As handsome as he is with his hair and sparkling eyes, I hate him. I thought it'd be fun, but this mean loser is making my life hell. I spend seven days with him, and I'm losing the will to live. Surprisingly, he kinda makes my heart race when I see him, but that's beside the point. I just need to last a week, and I'll never see him again. But at the same time, I don't want to let him go. Lovely trailer at the side made by @kimbasgirl
Lie to Me: A Mermaid Tail by shadowhuntrs
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The whole slow walk home, I couldn’t get the image of him leaning in for the kiss out of my head. It reappeared every time I closed my eyes. Nate had learned my biggest secret. And I knew I wasn’t going to earn it back. Meet Ashlyn Montgomery, a normal teen girl. Well, sorta. See, she's kinda a mermaid. And when she meets Nate, her entire world flips upside down. And then Aidan comes along. She's trapped in a love triangle, and the only stable thing in her life is her bestie Paisley, who doesn't even know her secret! What is a fish to do? Reader beware, this isn't your normal love triangle. Follow a fish as she battles tough decisions and other challenges in Lie to Me: A Mermaid Tale. © Copyright to iWantYou2WantMe at wattpad.com.
To Trust Love yet Again? by observant_listener
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The life of Emerald Smith changed when she witnessed a crime done out of selfish love. The event marked her deeply, and she became afraid to fall in love. Determined to avoid it, would she ever learn to trust love all over again?
Don't Go Out In The Woods Today by littlepinkcupcake
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The legend of ‘The Black Shuck’ is of a ghostly black dog said to roam the countryside and coastline of Norfolk. Recent news coverage reports deaths caused by animal attacks in the area so when Amy is confronted with the mythical creature her life gets confusing and the last thing she needs is a new, young, and fresh out of university teacher becoming overly protective of her. (Student, Teacher/Werewolf Romance)
Slip (Watty Awards 2012) by AflyingMonkey
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I am slipping into a black hole. Maybe it was the loneliness or maybe it was the mystery, but I wanted to know him. I wanted to just talk to him and maybe have a cup of coffee with him and maybe tear down my walls for him. I just really wanted to say something. I don't know why.
You Keep Me Awake by Bluee_Butterfly
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He swallows, intertwining our fingers together; my grip feeling as fragile as an injured bird in his, but safe at the same time. He levels our gazes so that we could be seeing eye-to-eye. But afraid of what I'll glimpse if I look too close, I focus rebelliously on the licks of flame that frame his features. “Zora”, my name dances on his tongue, “Look at me.