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The Stories of the Celestials by moonforest1124
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2014 Copyright © A. M. Forest All Rights Reserved What would it be like to experience the life of a Celestial creature? The life of a dragon, an elf, a shifter, an elemental, a vampire, a demon? To feel what they felt; to see what they saw; to love how they loved? These are the stories of their pasts, the stories of the Celestials - six worlds shown through the eyes of their inhabitants.
I Saved The Bad Boy's Life by dark_chick2025
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"Yes! I've made it this far and apart from the dull throb in my leg I'm A-okay." That was until, I lost my footing while trying to go down the two small steps. I prepared myself to receive a face full of dirt and pain. But it never came. I felt the warmth of strong arms holding me. I could smell his heavenly cologne being this close. My face was pushed against his strong chest and I could hear the steady beat of his heart. Lifting my face up to look at my saviour, I realised it was someone I'd never thought I'd bump into any time soon. "I know this doesn't even come close to what you did," his deep voice suddenly rang out, "but I do hope this is a start." Archer fùcking Freeman. *** A skateboard, a bus, and an asshole. These three things changed Winter Meyers life forever. Bullied by Archer ever since they were 12, Winter Meyers is bound to hate the infamous bad boy. When it stops though, she couldn't care to find out why. She had her own secrets and they moved their seperate ways. That is until, fate throws them back together again. And this time, Archer's secrets are not going to remain buried. All because she saved the bad boy's life. *** Cover by @mydearcc
Burning Sky by VeronicaMorfi
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Highest Ranking: #57 in Paranormal Sora Gate has a lot of reasons for not wanting to go back to school. Every night, her dreams remind her that she is the culprit behind the fire that destroyed her school. But after a whole summer of keeping her secret, it's time to face her demons. If only she knew who was the guy that pulled her out of the fire, the same guy that knows her secret, the guy with the black eyes. Sora doesn't believe it's a coincidence when the new student in her school, Drake, ends up in her class, and he just so happens to have the same piercing black eyes from her dreams. After they touch for the first time, and sparks fly up their arms, Drake starts to stoke Sora, telling her he knows her secret and that he wants to help. But what he thinks he knows and what he reveals to her about himself are going to shake Sora's world to its core. Because Drake comes from a family of dragons, and he believes that Sora is one of them. Sora thought that burning down her school would be the most stressful experience she had to go through, but that's not the case when a group of dragons is about to come after her. Because Sora is not a dragon. She is something even worse, and everybody wants her dead.
The day I turned. by Gagalover
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A story of a girl with lots of stories. Read to find out what her stories are.
Inclined Apathy by ariavansaysvats
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Highest in Mystery/Thriller: #36 Tamsin Fletcher is everything, but outgoing and disastrous. She is new on Aravis Lane in the town of Bluewick and is shy and lost as ever. Or at least, that is what people think. She is trying to fit in as a normal teenager, but with so many lies and secrets dangling in her life, will she be able to trust anyone? Carrying a hidden past and wounded secrets, Tamsin finds herself between vigorous downfalls, a passionate and forbidden love, and rising temptations. Temptations which can be very disastrous and crush everything.
Childhood Crush [Part 1- Complete] by Untroubledsoul
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It's about two mortal childhood arch enemies who declared their hate for each other at the very young age. But is it really? When Chuck Montrey had to leave Kuwait and go back to the Philippines, promising to go back to Cassandra Monroe, leaving her at the capable hands of his best friend; James Greene. What would happen now? Would she wait for her mistaken childhood crush, or would she venture on a new adventure with James Greene or a mysterious new suitor; the famous Chuck Morris, a hollywood superstar! What could a girl do when she got into something more than what she bargained for? Read on and you shall see. Would you be a Team James? Team Morris? or Team Montrey? :D Let's see shall we. This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, places and incidents are product’s of the author’s imagination or are used fictiously and are not to be construed as real. Any resemblance to actual events, organizations, or persons, living or dead is entirely coincidental. Copyright © 2014 All rights reserved © No part of this book may be used or reproduced in any manner whatsoever without written permission, except in the case of brief quotations embodied in critical articles and reviews. This is not for the faint-hearted. This story contains foul language, unsuitable scenes, violence for young audiences (Age 13 and below) So if you can't stomach this, then please I suggest for you to go look for another story. But if not, and this wouldn’t scar your innocence and outlook in life (yeah right) and conflict with your prayers, then go on. You have been warned. Cover Credits to: @cgthreena