*ALERT* THIS IS THE UNEDITED VERSION OF DYING BREATH *ALERT* The edited version has begun to be posted so if you wish to read those chapters, feel free too. The plot is the same but the writing is much better. SUMMARY: When Sarah falls sick unexpectedly and learns she is on her death bed, her teenage nemesis reappears still willing to offer her her dreams. Will she accept or act the part of an idiot and reject immortality?

Candelaria Castro, or Cande as she insists on most people calling her, has a rather strict outlook on life. "Life is too quick, too fleeting. It's better to do things now rather than later. Later might never come." Sweets are seen as a luxery, exercise as a must, and moving from her deceased father's home in Spain to her married mother's home in Japan just a roadbump on her lifeplan. With her eyes set on the distant future, Cande lands herself next to someone who is more than happy to just enjoy the sweet things in life. As the world around her begins to grow more and more complicated with dangerous plots and unexpected family members, she discovers just how sour her outlook on life may be. Life may be short, but she'll soon realize there are somethings worth slowing down to savor. **Awesome Cover by AnimeFanToTheDeath** **Sister book to Yours to Hold**