So these peoms are the ones I have to write for school. I really would like some feedback on them so maybe before I turn them in I can make them better. I love peotry and so please enjoy the wide range of topics

Ellison was happy enough with her best friend, River. But when River suddenly moves away leaving Ellison alone in her small country town, Ellison isn't quite sure what to do with herself. The night before he leaves, she gives him her most prized possession: a custom made, one-of-a-kind dreamcatcher necklace she claims will protect him from all the evil of the world. The necklace works better than expected. Years later, River Wolfe hits the big time. His face is everywhere almost mocking Ellison and she can't help but yearn for his attention, but has he already forgotten his best friend? You'd think so, wouldn't you? But River has a secret of his own, will he be able to find Ellison and tell her? This story is a "flip book". You'll be able to read the entire book from Ellison's POV, but after her story is told, you'll get the exclusive chance to see the story from River's POV.