Rachel's List
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Laptops and Mousetrap Cars by City_On_A_Hill
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How many plastic discs fit inside my laptop's DVD player? Two. How many come out? Dunno. Let's find out! -.-.-.-.-..-.-.-. The story of a girl, her laptop, and a mousetrap car. But you already knew that.
Star Wars: The Jedi Reborn ✓ by SapphireAlena
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Luke Skywalker, the Last Jedi, faces his toughest challenge yet. To rebuild the Jedi Order, he must give up his personal hopes and dreams. Every move is critiqued by not only the New Republic Senate but also the Force-ghost Jedi Council of the past. His sister's tumultuous marriage and unplanned pregnancy, disillusionment with the Jedi Code, and a sinister Empire that will not admit defeat all compound as Luke establishes the Jedi Academy. Join him as he battles the darkness within himself, discovers the origins of the Jedi, and fulfills his destiny pursuing compassion above all else. The one thing that a Jedi is forbidden may be the only thing that saves him and the galaxy. (A fan reboot set between Return of the Jedi and The Force Awakens in the tradition and style of the Original Trilogy.) TRIGGER WARNINGS: Luke suffers from PTSD after the Emperor's Force-lightning attack, which is limited to his reliving the experience. There is discussion about past history for a few characters in slavery and ensuing abuse, but nothing in real time and nothing graphic. The focus is on healing. Cover by: @FayLane Editor: @MichaelHoliday WATTPAD OFFICIAL FANFICTION STORY as of 4/24/2018 WATTPAD FEATURED STORY 3/28/17-7/23/17
Reviews Written for #NBR: Constructive Critiques on Writing by ChayAvalerias
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This book features a collection of some of the reviews that I have written for fellow members in the #NBR community. These comments span across the following categories Description, Plotting and POV, Characterization, Scene Construction, and Advanced Editing. I will also include a few other pieces in here such as "Advice for Young Writers" and later "Popular Writing Books on the Market." The Next Big Recognition or #NBR is more than just a contest; it is an amazing writing community that features some of the most talented writers and reviewers that Wattpad has to offer. All members undergo a thorough screening process to ensure the quality of their work. Once you join, you then participate in weekly reviews of three chapters from fellow members. Recognition is given to both the spotlighted authors for the week and for those reviewers whose critiques were deemed most useful by the authors. To learn more about #NBR visit @DawnStarling's profile or my profile to look up the #NBR contest book. (Remember, not everyone can be a member; acceptance into the community is in itself an honor!) Please do not ask me to review your work. At this time, I only review for #NBR members. Best wishes, C. Avalerias
Today My Life Begins (Bruno Mars Fan Fiction) by babysquirrel
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(COMPLETED) Bruno Mars has a bad habit of sleeping with different women when he has lost control of his feelings. That was until two lucky radio winners won VIP backstage passes that changed his scene. Bruno had a change of heart for Marceline that sparked his fire, but he has no idea what he has gotten himself into when Marceline's ex boyfriend Calvin tries to bring himself back into her world. Marceline and Bruno's rollercoaster relationship is challenged everyday of their lives as Calvin continues to stalk them. Bruno does everything in his power to keep Marceline and their friends and family safe from this psychotic man. Deep dark secrets are revealed about Calvin as his jealousy spins out of control and has made it clear that if he can not have Marceline, no one can.
Demon Hunters: Book 1 Faith [editing] by ChayAvalerias
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Highest Ranking: #42 in Fantasy (Nov 2019),#65 in Paranormal (Feb 2018)....God has sent watchers, a powerful set of warrior angels, to earth to track down and kill the evil descendants of the Nephilim, who have managed to unleash demonic powers embedded deep in their blood. As the apocalypse nears, demon recruiters seek these descendants to build a human army destined to rule the world. When a teenage boy releases a power so strong that it literally freezes all time, an epic race ensues to learn who controls such a power. Zoe, the best watcher on the planet, is pitted against Ren, the best demon recruiter. Who will find this boy first? Who will kill him? Who will rescue him? Updates on Wednesday and Saturdays. I'm updating a little at a time, but good news is that the novel is about 80% completed! Also, check out the last chapter called "Main Characters at Central West High" for some character descriptions and images *Special thanks to Amber Boyd (@the3dreamers) for this amazing cover.* *Special thanks to @Tegan1311 and @the3dreamers for their assistance on cleaning up the first three chapters and to the #TWE and #NBR community for their feedback and support on this work.
Ravenous Three by sandstormsamurai
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Adults know this secret. But no child does until they turn seventeen. It's a tradition that has been carried for a long time. Among the kids turning seventeen that year, Genari is bound to learn what this means. When she does, her life is turned upside down. She chooses to flee to a precarious school floating above the sea. At this school, Elandra, people are turned into a class of unique superbeings. Unfortunately, it has its problems entangled with the secret. She'd have to find a way to safety, but can she save her mother and outrun the chaos that is eating the two civilizations of South Yac and Twac Hill? ____ _ Back to updating weekly. Check back every weekend to see a new update!
Next Big Recognition Contest by DawnStarling
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This is a contest designed to help expose your novel to the greater Wattpad community. Whether you just joined Wattpad or have been an active member for years, the sole purpose of this contest is to assist in the recognition of your book. NBR'S CURRENT CHAMPION REVIEWER: @LLMontez Testimony: I am floored at the level of amazing analysis, it was like having a large group of beta readers. - @h_coyle Because of all of you and NBR, my story is now ranking in fantasy and continues to climb! - @ktflynn Being spotlighted on NBR helped my story SO much! I got some incredibly useful tips and my story even made it to the What's Hot list in the Romance genre! - @AmeVicky02 I was overwhelmed - I can honestly say this is the most thorough feedback I've been given on anything I've ever written (tears up) - @twin_cities Being in the spotlight is cray to the zay! I was overwhelmed with the amount of positive, helpful, and inspiring comments we received. The NBR contest is full of amazing people and is really cool to be a part of. - @KaraMichelleBooks I can't even begin to explain how hard it was to choose a winner and two runner ups. I want to keep you all chained under my bed so I can trade you food and water for feedback. - @cjbirch The feedbacks were awesome! Grammatical errors. Sentence structures. Flow. Descriptions. Everything has been so useful in helping me understand how I can improve. Some of you really put in so much effort to break it down it's unbelievable. - @JovyLow6 Previous featured authors were lying when they said it was difficult to choose a winner--because it's not difficult, it's near to impossible!!! - @PipSqueeks88 Not only do these rounds help expose me to new authors but critiquing others' works makes me think of my own work in different ways and how to improve it.. - @consciousdreamer1 Not exaggerating, this has been some of the best advice I've ever received from readers - @Holly_Gonzalez
Black Stars - The Mors Mortis Trilogy Book 1 by Skylar-Black
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*WATTPAD FEATURED FEB 2018* *2018 FICTION AWARD WINNER IN SCI FI CATEGORY* Leah Azemar's soul has been sent to the world of the dead. She just doesn't know it. ... Leah Azemar has spent her life trapped in a town that moves slower than she does, hiding her abnormalities from people who would fear and exploit her. But when Leah slips up and a mysterious boy called Jared comes asking unanswerable questions, Leah is thrust into a fight that she's convinced has nothing to do with her. But Jared knows things about her that he shouldn't. And he can do things that no one else in her world can do. Soon, Leah begins to realise that somewhere, deep in her subconscious, her memories have been trapped. And the more she remembers, the more she realises how badly she needs to return to the living.
#PartyParrot Writing Prompts by WriteAThon
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Different types of writing prompts to help get creative juices flowing!