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Memories by PurpleCielo1117
PurpleCielo1117
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❛ In which Johnathan is given a second chance to love and to lose her again. ❜ Ranked #393 in General Fiction 【I Survived The Most Brutal Review】 【Winner of The Brigade Choice Awards for SS】 【Winner of Star Writing Awards for GF】 【Winner of The Undiscovered Awards for GF, Original At Its Core and Straight From The Heart】 【Winner of Rose Awards for GF】
Like Hurricanes by live-artistically
live-artistically
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Cigarettes, lilac skies and poetry at 3am: sixteen-year-old Pietro ''Pit'' Rossi knows the adrenaline of feeling empty and infinite at the same time. With the reputation of a goofy idiot who doesn't care about anything at all, getting held back at school doesn't seem like a problem. But it is. Because Pit cares about everything, and he always cares too much. [[word count: 70,000-80,000 words]]
UNRAVEL by Rei-Shun
Rei-Shun
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Being tied by a contract to fulfill the desires of others in exchange for the security of a secret kept for hundreds of years under great pressure and pain, Kei Nagare faked his death and ran away to free himself from those responsibilities. As such incident caused a great chaos, he hid his real identity and he became so stern to himself that he never dares to mingle with other people. He thought he could stay like that until he dies. But not until a tragic girl from a noble clan, crash open the iron wall he built around him and turn his ice-cold heart to a burning desire of protecting people who are important to him. As he protect people who are important to him, he's exposing them to death from his own hands. Though the desire is to protect, the blood of a killer still lingers. A monster dwelling deep inside his soul, capable of sucking life out from anything around him. It may have been sealed for quite sometime, but it will soon devour himself and those around him. If protecting means to kill? Then is death his only redemption? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ cover made by: @WritingsFromTheHeart summary: @rhapsodias
The Lean and Hungry Look by MurphyChapelwood
MurphyChapelwood
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Myth and reality are one. Conspiracies, ancient and modern alike, manipulate every aspect of life, every interaction. Everyone lives blind to secret masters and secret dangers, but it's easy when the monsters look human, or worse, are human. In this world, in a nameless American metropolis, Uaine Dupree leads a desultory life as a penniless club promoter on the fringe of an already fringe society. When he receives a mysterious e-mail from a wealthy recluse, Uaine embarks on a nightlong odyssey of horrors, both new and old. [Formerly Wattpad Featured Paranormal Story from November 2016 until July 2017.]