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Powdered Gold by SecretTome
Powdered Gold
SecretTome
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SYNOPSIS: Sophylia Summers, an introverted sixteen year old living as an expatriate in Singapore, decides to download a random chat app called 'Chatterbox'. She begins a conversation with a stranger that changes everything, and she is left to distinguish between what is reality and what is simply a facade of powdered perfection. This story is inspired by the writing style behind (the amazing) Cecelia Ahern's 'Where Rainbows End' aka 'Love, Rosie'. It is composed entirely of letters, text messages, memos and a collection of personal notes that would hopefully tell a meaningful story :) Cover by the amazing xhemmingshugsx, check out her stories here: https://www.wattpad.com/user/xHemmingshugsx
Too Young (The Jewel Project #1) by Wimbug
Too Young (The Jewel Project #1)
Wimbug
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"Life is a series of choices, kiddo. You either choose to trust me or you don't." Sam Grant had always wanted to become an archaeologist and live a life of adventure. But once he leaves for a study camp in the jungle of Yucatan to get him started on a dream career, he finds that his future job is not a problem. Coming out alive, however, is. Faced with his family's oldest enemy who desperately wants him dead, a secret agency who wants him to work for them and the girl of his dreams, Sam is forced to find balance before he loses his head. Literally. Murder, mysterious team mates, ancient traps and the responsibility of bringing everyone back home safely - Maybe Sam is just too young to deal with everything at once. *** Book 1 of the COMPLETED Jewel Project Series. Highest rank: [#8 in Adventure] Epic cover by @italychick The Undiscover Writer Awards Winner for Best Adventure Rose Award Winner for Best Adventure Crystal Awards Winner for Best Action