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4 stories
The Noblest Thief by elegantly_eccentric
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Kendris is the heir to the throne of Eldora. After her mother exiles her from the kingdom, she is left with only one chance of regaining her honour, capture the Thief and bring him to her Queen. A Thief by necessity, the nameless man is bound by duty to steal the ultimate weapon. He alone holds the power to tip the scales of the war between the two nations of Lovell and Eldora. Kasca has the gift of healing, but no amount of magic could heal the pain of loosing her home. After her city is invaded she is forced to flee alone to the capital city of Lovell, leaving behind everything she had ever known. As their paths intertwine they are forced to make the choice between what they believe is right, and what they are told is right. Can they see past their honour, duty and vengeance before it is too late? (Previously Daughter Of Eldora)
Karma by anirrelevantsaucepan
anirrelevantsaucepan
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Dusk turned to night. Blue turned to black. Hot turned to cold. --- Imagine if every breath you took was watched over. If every movement you made was recorded. If every sin you committed was a one-way ticket to an eternity of darkness. Because what goes around, comes around. Because she has no mercy and you have no power. Because Karma saw that, and she's coming for you. * * * Wattpad Featured Story. #71 in Action. #9 in Paranormal. --- all credit for the cover goes to @randomthingsbyme c:
The Unheavenly Angel by Kay-May
Kay-May
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Leah Emerson has juggled school life and demon fighting since she was first attacked by the hellish beasts three years ago. Equipped with throwing knives, angel seals, and blessings, Leah thinks she is more than capable of sending any paranormal creature back to where it came from. That is until a rogue angel nearly kills her, and Isaiah-an attractive but unbearably arrogant fallen angel fresh from the depths of Hell-saves her life. With Heaven struggling to deal with an increasing human population and revolts against the system, Leah is left to die at the hands of the rouge. But Leah will not go down that easily. With only Isaiah to help her, Leah must search Heaven and Earth for the murderous angel's identity before he can succeed in his mission.
Project A by Last_white_rose
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Hannah Morrison knew she was going to struggle with her new school-- but out of all the things she deemed could go wrong, never did she think of zombies. Now, Hannah struggles to see what is reality, after all could this really be happening? Or is this just an awful dream she can't seem to wake from. Follow Hannah as she meets up with other teen survivors in a horrific battle to leave the school alive. *May be disturbing to some viewers*