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Shouldn't Have Kissed You. by Mulelacynthia
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He kissed her on his stage and everyone loved it. He enjoyed it himself but little did he know with who's daughter he was messing with. And for only that innocent kiss they shared, they were forced to get married and that is his biggest mistake. To everyone, the married out of love but to him it was for revenge. What will then happen when they stay under one roof? Will his revenge get the best of him or will love conquer him. The only way to find out is by reading this.
Retrograde & Fall by mediocresouls
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Olivia McNamara has never been one to believe in coincidences and the recent death of her older sister has only served to strengthen her resolve. Stuck in a perpetual retrograde motion, she's plummeting. Alternatively, there's Grayson Parker, the son of a bookstore owner but has a disregard for paperback novels. He's falling but in an entirely different sense. ⇒ #604 of chicklit ⇒ #106 of contemporary
Playing With Life #1 by Splashes102
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**Highest ranking: #51 in YoungAdultReads as of 11/8/18** **Earlier known as Just Confused** *** Senior year at St.Anthony's is supposed to go smooth for Eline, the most adored and the most prestigious student of the school. She could then apply for Harvard or Princeton, or wherever her dreams could chase her to. Or that's what she thought. With invisible barricades tying her limits and ideas, a mysterious brother with a dark secret , a guilty past and some unexpected events, her life is just getting started. *** None of the images and gifs used in the story are mine. They belong to the respective owners. Cover made by me.
Cinderhella by ShonniAnita
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"I will unleash hell, and then and only then will you understand that that girl in that fairy tale and I have nothing more in common than a name. I will destroy you. I am that horror to rival all horrors, that myriad of evil never written about. I am Cinderhella," I said with fury as I stood mere centimeters away from my aggressor, Estella. Every family has its secrets, some more gruesome and unbelievable than others and that is soon understood by Cinderella as she prepares to bond with her father's fiancée and her twin daughters. Cinderella Sanchez is a teenage beauty with a sharp tongue and fiery attitude, a sharp contrast to her older sister Alison, although fluent in sarcasm, her sarcastic and witty comments may be a cry for help, a sign that she had never fully mourned the untimely death of her mother as bouts of anger and sadness flare up sporadically. In an attempt to move on, a blossoming romance ensues between her father and a single mother by the name of Estella, soon the two families unite. In the midst of unity, mysteries unfold and lives are put in danger in this twisting tale. Nothing, and no one are as they seem.
Hatter's Revenge (rewriting - read at own risk) by Jagermeanshunter
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There are a few things you need to know about Wonderland. First off, completely misnamed. It should be Terrorland. People don't just accidentally tumble into Wonderland, it sucks them in. There is no following of cute white rabbits with pocket watches. Wonderland is dangerous and you can lose a lot more than your head if you're not careful. Second, the Hearts are in control, but they shouldn't be. The throne of Wonderland rightfully belongs to the Spade heir. But he's currently missing. Third, and probably most important, is that Madison Hatter is NOT a native of Wonderland. He was yanked through a mirror many years ago and has been trying to survive Wonderland ever since. Now he has an idealistic young Real-Worlder on his hands and a rebellion in his heart. Mad is going to remove that Heart Queen if it's the last thing he does. She's the one who stole him from his life all those years ago and he's been waiting for the moment when he can tear her life to shreds in repayment. Beautiful cover made by StormRidden **Warning** I thought it fair to warn potential readers that there is gun violence in this story. If this is something that really bothers you, I would avoid this book. Otherwise please enjoy. Copyright © 2017
Healing Ethan #THESHINEAWARDSROMANCE by Oumayma9193
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Aidan has been through a lot. From hating her own name, hating her parents for the misery they put her through, to hating the place she was born and raised in. When she finally decides to move away to start a new life, she didn't expect a bigger problem in her way. A problem that involves a stubborn Ethan. But this time, she can't run away, she wouldn't even if she wanted to. She have promised herself not to because she believes they can heal each other. Follow Aidan in her journey as she heals herself from her past, heals the boy from himself, and as she stumbles upon love with the most unfortunate and unexpected person in the world. Updates: Every Monday.(slow updates) Cover credit: @JasminAMiller All Rights Reserved to Oumayma 9193 Started: 15.12.2016 Finished: N/A
The Moonwalker by MoonLoop
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| WATTPAD EDITOR'S CHOICE | Major Aula Reed is a Canadian fighter pilot, veteran astronaut, and closeted bisexual. She's stationed on the second International Lunar Base or ILUB-2 with seven other crewmates. To be separated from Earth means facing radiation, meteorites, and equipment failure while under constant public scrutiny. For Aula, it also means struggling with memories of ILUB-1: the worst disaster in space exploration since the shuttle era. While she tries not to let her first mission overshadow her second, the Moon is an unforgiving place. It only takes one mistake, no matter how small, for history to repeat itself. This is a story of the near future informed by the lives of today's astronauts, whose triumphs and tragedies are immortalized in the public eye.
Until The End (First Draft) by EisenMadchen
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After overhearing her parents' plans to escape a notorious leader, Alisz's life turns from normal to drastically in danger. With just her mother and a fragile new friend, she is hauled away from her home, her father, and her elder brother. Fear is powerful, but courage is stronger. In hope of escaping, she secretly plans anytime she gets the chance. But she's not the only one planning; the Nazi commander she is up against has plans of his own-ones she cannot comprehend. Will her courage be strong enough? Is what is written in history always true? This is Alisz's story told until the end. Winner of StarWritingAwards for Best of Historical Fiction! First place winner of the Historical Fiction category in the Shoot for the Stars Awards. 3rd place winner if the Crystal Awards Genre (Historical Fiction). Winner of the Fiction Genres Unite Award for Best Historical Fiction. Top 20 in the Pursuit of Excellence Awards. ------------------- Cover by @AAKhan Copyright 2016.
Shattered Line by Ashanina
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Life and death are separated by a thin line. As a soul passes between them, a blank slate is presented anew. Emotions and experiences once forgotten are rekindled, in a never ending cycle of reincarnation. Exceptions exist to every rule and for Isla that line is blurred beyond distinction. Her memories of life and death remain etched into her very soul. Why is she an exception? Why does she experience death so often? Why is she constantly being pursued? Set upon at every turn Isla must find the answers in order to discover herself. Undergoing Editing. Picture for the cover is not mine :)
Monster Minds [completed] by HappilySinister
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Emily has always been fascinated by monsters. Not the ones hiding under the bed. Not the ones hiding in the closet. But the ones hiding behind bars. Privileged and cursed by her fathers position of authority in the state prison, Emily's fascination leads her down a dark and twisted path. Soon she finds herself in the middle of a murder investigation, a web of lies, and a killers game of love. She must battle between surrendering to the darkness or beating it back with her will. For readers aged 13+ Winner of the Un-Noticed Stories Awards! Finalist in the Top Of The Genre, Mystery/Thriller, 2016 Awards! UNEDITED FIRST DRAFT highest rank: 1 in Scary 3 in Criminals 5 in Sociopath