was chating with my bestie.. we just fantasized how god would have created the world :P and one though led to another and um.. jst tried converting my thoughts into a poem hope you like it :) corrections and tips are always welcomed :D

GO ON READ IT....IT AIN'T BAD :P

This is my first poem. Its a little emotional!. This poem is about the last hope a person is having after suffering from grief, and how he longs to believe that there must be a loving partner made to pull him out of his pain and show how much brighter the world looks. I hope you like it.Go ahead and read it.