This is my first story criticism welcome

You're a child that is abused and neglected by your family. Having enough, you run away and into Slenderwoman's forest where you meet a new family

F/n Schnee had it rough his whole life. His family mistreated him like a slave and a training dummy at such a young age that it's highly unacceptable. They forced him to work for them, locked him in a cell, beat him, and called him a disgrace to the Schnee family name. However, they never knew he had a second...cold Semblance unlike most of them. Disclaimer:I do not own RWBY. It is owned by Rooster Teeth.

after betraying Slade Wilson I switched out my 'employment' to a lighter side of the spectrum and found my self-working for a small 'superhero' group called the teen titans, and then I found her... (P.S. when reading expect language for only a mature audience)

An alternate universe where Chara never fell in to the underground, meaning that Asriel never died and there was never a second war on humans. Toriel divorced he King for unknown reasons, stepped down as queen, and decided to live a simpler life as a school teacher in Snowdin Town. She teaches a high school history class. The main character is one of the students (age:17) and has a crush on Mrs. Toriel. Setting: Snowdin Town School Main Character information (might add more later) --------------------- Name: Eric Wattson Age: 17 Gender: Male (straight) --------------------- Name: Toriel Age: ? Gender: Female (straight) ---------------------

A rip in time sends a new and unused creation of samatha into the world of remnant, but sadly his appearance wasn't wanted in a certain flower themed family.

Growing up with Power Rangers and a hearing about the shattered grid comic series I've decided to do a story on it the Kimberly in this story is from the shattered grid series she's the alternate Kimberley read bio for info

This is a way for me to start writing and let my emotions to flow. I hope you enjoy as this is my first story. Have a nice day/night! (this story has been discontinued! sorry!)