This is my first story criticism welcome

You're a child that is abused and neglected by your family. Having enough, you run away and into Slenderwoman's forest where you meet a new family

F/n Schnee had it rough his whole life. His family mistreated him like a slave and a training dummy at such a young age that it's highly unacceptable. They forced him to work for them, locked him in a cell, beat him, and called him a disgrace to the Schnee family name. However, they never knew he had a second...cold Semblance unlike most of them. Disclaimer:I do not own RWBY. It is owned by Rooster Teeth.

after betraying Slade Wilson I switched out my 'employment' to a lighter side of the spectrum and found my self-working for a small 'superhero' group called the teen titans, and then I found her... (P.S. when reading expect language for only a mature audience)

An alternate universe where Chara never fell in to the underground, meaning that Asriel never died and there was never a second war on humans. Toriel divorced he King for unknown reasons, stepped down as queen, and decided to live a simpler life as a school teacher in Snowdin Town. She teaches a high school history class. The main character is one of the students (age:17) and has a crush on Mrs. Toriel. Setting: Snowdin Town School Main Character information (might add more later) --------------------- Name: Eric Wattson Age: 17 Gender: Male (straight) --------------------- Name: Toriel Age: ? Gender: Female (straight) ---------------------

Our weapon summoning y/n was sent parallel world of his but cuter and smaller (I do not own anything the art and the dialogue what I do own is the creativity *wink*)

You were transported to the rwby universe by a mysterious power and was given the power to summon any weapon, armor and items from bows to gun's, swords to lances, armor, items anything in the multiverse. And to bring peace and prosperity to the world of reminent (I don't own RWBY it belongs to Rooster teeth and the art work belongs to there respective owners, what I do own is the creativity)

A rip in time sends a new and unused creation of samatha into the world of remnant, but sadly his appearance wasn't wanted in a certain flower themed family.

Growing up with Power Rangers and a hearing about the shattered grid comic series I've decided to do a story on it the Kimberly in this story is from the shattered grid series she's the alternate Kimberley read bio for info

This is a way for me to start writing and let my emotions to flow. I hope you enjoy as this is my first story. Have a nice day/night! (this story has been discontinued! sorry!)