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Beastly Little Boy by sandydragon1
sandydragon1
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An unruly ten year old boy, consumed by grief after the death of his father two years ago, has gradually turned into a bear. His mother has him captured and sent deep into the forest after she realizes that she cannot properly care for him. Now left to fend for himself, Bernard must adapt to life in the wilderness while struggling to preserve what's left of his humanity. Cover by @-DeeIsDead-
Jeopardizing the Election (boyxboy)(Wattys2016) by Lost_Violet
Lost_Violet
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17 year old Taylor Fields, the son of the top Republican candidate, can't wait for all the election stress to diminish, can't wait for the election to be over. He desperately wants to enjoy the little that's left of his senior year, as well as patch up his tenuous relationship with his girlfriend. Honestly, he just wants things to go back to normal. The last thing that he wants is Wren Sanchez, the son of the top candidate and openly gay "bad boy", transferring to his high school. "Fraternizing with the enemy" shouldn't even be an issue, but it became one when Wren seems to not only take a liking to Taylor, but also begins to openly pursue him. And for some reason Taylor isn't as annoyed about that as he should be.. What could possibly go wrong? Critique to @TorissaNikole. PLEASE go check out her stories, she is beautiful and amazing and she's awesome!!