Fate? (1D fanfic) Re-Made

Hello readers! I've recently read 'Fate?' and have come to realise it's very.. choppy and not well put together. So, I've decided to re-write it! It'll be more in depth, and have fewer characters (Only the ones that were'nt really needed for the story). So all in all it'll be different, a lot but still Have major poin...