A writer games based on the last hunger games. <~> (The 1st Writer Games by Ravenger)

This is just a short story that I wrote to experiment with genres outside of my comfort zone. Tell me what you think and give me honest feedback! I want to know if paranormal activity is my thing. Is it suspenseful? Do I explain it enough? Is the cliff hanger at the end upsetting?

This story follows Veronica Florence. A tough girl who is in serious need of a little cheer. She is very serious. As the new Council Command Dictatorship takes over, Veronica's life is changed. As you obviously know, there are five extents to the world. The sea extent, the dead extent, the upper extent, the non-magic extent, and the magic extent. I don't need to go over that we live in the non-magic extent and people of non-magic can not travel to other extents. The Council Command Dictatorship takes over and puts in new rules and restrictions. Will Veronica and her new friends find the secret to traveling through the different extents to save the world form the CCD? Or will the awful truth about CCD unravel and activate itself for total world domination? It's all up to Veronica now.

This is a story about six people who are a dynamic group of best friends. Throughout the story, relationship woes and dramatic changes shifts the group, and how some people in the group feel about others. This story was rated R by wattpad because it has a lot of cursing. But that is the only reason they forcefully made it into an R-rated story, just because of the cursing