Rewrite of my story Skies the Limit

Don't judge it till you read it! ;) Skies The Limit is a new VRMMORPG. Only 10 people got to beta test it. It's just out of it's beta stage but the beta testers have not been found. What happened when the game was in it's beta stages? What happened to the beta testers? Will they ever be found or will everyone forget about the testers that made this game a reality? Well a virtual one, but a reality none the less. This is a SLIGHTLY graphic book as in blood, etc. WARNING Have a great day guys! Feel free to give me advice on how you think the story could be better It would be great to hear your opinions! ~Kyodai Senpai