New to this but whatever whatever I tried

Heyy guys this is my first story so please excuse if i miss spell and word or dont like it

As kids Liliana and Luis were inseparable, but after the song Mi Nina Traviesa, a song he wrote for her becomes a hit Luis has to move to los angeles where he got a record signed by Del Record at age 16. Now 18 Luis decided to go back home away from everything for a while. But when Liliana and Luis eyes meet, will there kid feelings come back or is it in the past?

Luis Coronel never thought that the girl he found wondering around would be the love of his life... This book has alot of Grammer mistakes since I wrote this when I was younger. Read at your own risk.

Bethany is a normal teenage girl that has friends, party's almost every weekend but what happens when she gets kidnapped will she fall in love with her kidnaper or will she hate him? read to find out.