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This is my first story I've ever published anywhere. This is something I just made up one day with a friend of mine on Facebook. There may be another one, or I might let the story end where it does. I'm only fourteen, so I'd love advice from all you writers with much more skill. Hope you guys enjoy this, and remember... the penguins are watching...