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Society Dysfunctional by Neon_N3o
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Meet these five troubled teens : the drug addict, the amnesiac, the narcissistic player, the pyromaniac and the mentally disturbed genius. They may be worlds apart, but they all have one thing in common. They are the only ones who had witnessed the gruesome murder of Eddy O’Doherty. And none of them know who the killer is. But what happens when someone finds out that the secrets of that night indeed remain unburied and come to hunt them down, one by one? What happens when one of them must take the fall for O’Doherty’s death? Told in the alternating voices of the five, Society Dysfunctional is a dark teen thriller that explores the shadowed side of teenage life and a never-ending quest for redemption.
Hell And Back [Being rewritten] by SpeakingWithSilence
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Untitled (Editing- On Hold) by VanillaIceCake
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“What could be someone’s dream, could be another one’s nightmare.” In Cold War era America, Shelton Morris is nothing more than another writer with the dream of making it big. He thinks he’s got it right when he decides to write about a mental institution; however, while doing research, he crosses paths with Timothy Harrison, a young homosexual kept locked in one of the so-called hospitals. From then on, truths start to unravel before the writer, causing his fictional horror story to bloom into an informative tragedy as he explores the terror of what went on when society cast a blind eye on the unwanted. (Shelton's POV)
Jem's Diary- Back to 1986. by LadyJC
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Step into Jem's world. Read her secret diary if you dare! People are calling this very different! What do you think?
Jade Butterfly by SilentDreamer888
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Jade Palmer is a senior in high school. She is mostly invisible to other students and tries to go through high school without any drama. Jade has other worries as she's playing the role of her mother. With her dad working till late she helps o take care of her sister and the house. She Never thought that she'd be noticed by Matt Preston, the quiet, detached slightly intimidating student at her school, let alone that they'll become parts of each other's lives.
Transcend by Vaichi
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Caleb Ward doesn't believe in the Underworld. It's the Underworld - abode of the damned, land of eternal sleep, and complete hogwash. But after a chance encounter with a mysterious girl looming over the dead body of his Physics teacher, Caleb finds that the existence of the Underworld may not be such a myth after all. And that's when things take a turn for the worse.
TRUST, LUST AND OTHER DRUGS by heyits_mazz
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Jo is an ordinary girl. She falls for her brother's enemy, Ryan but little did she know that he was going to be her school teacher. but what happens when her enemy or her housemate starts liking her? Bono will go to any extent to break Ryan and Jo up. What will Jo do now? book trailer -http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=afwtm6Yw0w4
And With A Twist Of Fate... by write__right
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Stella Winsmin, a former nerd, is starting to cover her nerdy ways and isn't even realizing it. She's acting cooler, communicating better and everything seems to be changing. But will a twist in fate and almost perfect timing change feelings Stella thought were set in stone for her long time arch nemesis and school golden boy, Aiden Sanchez?
Cherry Ann by TukiYuki
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16 year old Cherry Ann liked her quite life. Though she has no clue of her family history. Curiosity plagues her after her grandmother flipped over some old photos. But what can she do without any information to go off of. What is the secret her family is hiding? Why does she feel like she doesn't belong here? Who is the guy she keeps seeing, and why does she feel like she can't live without him? Will she survive the events to come? What will happen to her family and all she knows?