pompomtaka1
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Hello, I am moloware(pen-name), a newbie to writing, I hope to improve my writing through constructive criticism, though that is too far away so for now, I'd be happy with one or two views.
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In a world of dragons, tribes, races and clans, moloware was a bronze dragon, not a superior golden dragon, nor a lowly dragon-newt, just average in the middle. But scary things can happen when an idiotic dragon like moloware gains a tad bit too much determination, which oh by the way, is what moloware was born with...