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Lydia- The Pet Communicator (Wattys13- Finalist!) by durriza
Lydia- The Pet Communicator (Wattys13- Finalist!)
durriza
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[Re-writting+ Editing] [PG] Lydia was living a normal and happy life in Cambridge, United Kingdom. She had deep affection towards animals, since a very small age. Lydia built a small space (shelter) for disowned and sick animals back at her home, with the help of her father. She was her daddy's little girl. Lydia's dream was to be one of the best Veterinarian, by completing her studies at the Cambridge University. When it was the final day of her board exams, Lydia met with an accident while saving a little puppy that got trapped in the middle of the road, because of some weighty trash. Lydia was hurt gravely on her head and she went into coma for six months, since the damage reached her brain. By surprise, after waking up from coma, the first voice she heard was of a pigeon. The pigeon cooed, while sitting on the hospital's window, "I got some sticks for my nest, great!" Lydia was amazed, shocked and puzzled. After her recovery, she realized that she could hear and understand the animals, also the animals discovered that she could understand them. But sadly, her world started falling apart when she confessed to her close ones that she could actually understand the animals, excluding her father. Reached- #6 Science Fiction/ #7 Fanstasy and Watty Awards 2013 Finalist.
Key To The Blue Flame by blaxsoda
Key To The Blue Flame
blaxsoda
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It was that cold, and snowy afternoon that she met him, the horrid, but yet intriguing being. Whose presence made her blood chill like the winter climate in the month of January. That was the day Jesse Ameli learned that the monsters do exist, whom lie just beyond the light. He, who's name was even dark interested and sacred her like the rest of his being, OBSIDIAN. His eyes seemed to impale her body as if he sees everything inside her... all her emotions and thoughts The unfriendly sneer of his lips taunted her, petrifying her. He was the start of the weird happening in her small life, the secrets left unsaid that she held deep within her that she was never suppose to know... started to unlock But curious she begins to mess with the fire that she never should have and slowly she begins to need him to rely on the one being she never wanted too.... Don't befriend the blue flames...
Together Forever. by iwontletyoufall
Together Forever.
iwontletyoufall
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"Together Forever," he breathed out slowly as he intertwined our fingers. "Don't make any promises you can't keep, babe." I reply. He grabs me by my waist and pulls me into his embrace, "I promise you, I will love you everyday of forever." His voice is husky and I notice his eyes are watering slightly. He leans down and kisses me passionately. I can't help but smile; he's mine forever. Together forever. Marie was your normal teenager. She's wasn't popular and she didn't have many friends. Until she met Ethan Hunt, the school's bad boy who changed her life the moment he promised her the world. But after catching him cheating after two long, faithful years of dating; her world comes crashing down on her. On top of having a past that could scar any teenager, with eating disorders, cutting, and depression. Marie finds herself having to make life altering decisions, maybe even the biggest decision she'll ever have to make. Will feeling depressed and alone make her resort to her old habits? Will she ever be able to love again? When Ethan tries to confront her will she fall back into the same feelings? Or stand strong? That's a lot of questions for one girl.